Hello !
I like your story and I hope you haven't abandoned it.

I don't really understand who is Cariul and the other guy, but I am French and I know I don't understand everything that I read (n_n)

About what I want to see in your story, I haven't a lot of demands, but I think I want the strawhat pirates (to ?) finish the chronicle in England (with adventure of course) and in the end they all come back on the Sunny. Maybe Ace, on his side, tries to bring them back, perhaps with his crew because alone it's too hard, and maybe it is because of his essays that they can return.
Well, I hope you understand what I want to explain (n_n)

See you soon
Katie :)

I’m quitting at this chapter, the reactions were unrealistic, forced and just plain weird. I can’t tell when this is supposed to even take place, and you seem to lack an understanding of either the Harry Potter world or the One Piece world. a simple example would be that you have Fudge as minister for magic in the mid 1980’s when he only became minister in 1990. Millicent Bagnold Was minister between 1980-1990. Then you have the straw hats referring to Hagrid as being a giant, when there are dozens of characters that they know who would be just as big and bigger than him who are just normal humans in the One Piece world, which also has giants, something that Robin would have a very thorough understanding of. The inclusion of OC’s just killed the last bit of my interest honestly.

Hopefully some luffy/Robin I like law but he ain’t no luffy. I like the fic

Poor ace great chapter

Pretty good chapter.

Pretty good chapter

You don’t like robin/ luffy? Pretty good chapter

Pretty interesting chapter

Another fantastic chapter

Interesting first chapter

I've been waiting for your story to come back. I love it

See you in 2021 for chapter 9

I love it looking forward to the next chapter

Another wonderful chapter. I’m really enjoying your rewrite of the story so far. Just a suggestion, maybe have Robin exhibit some her magical abilities sometime. Kind of like Harry did in the beginning of the first book.

Interesting premise, and the writing and characterization so far seems pretty good. Assuming she still gets a devil fruit, competes in the tournament, and that the tasks are the same, I'm curious how she'll deal with the devil fruit's weakness during the second task. Anyway, since you asked, my preference would be for the fic to remain gen as gen fics are the best!