Hey, that's amazing work you have done here! Don't stop! But I think that if you have stuck at this point, change your point of view. I mean, we have seen Niphrediel's feelings change towards Legolas and how she reacted, but why don't you continue from his pov to show his feelings for her from when he thought of her as a child, to whatever relationship you want them to form now...

I read these 16 chapters in one day & absolutely love this story. You left one hell of a cliffhanger and you haven't updated since 2005. This makes me sad because I want to read the rest of the story! Please come back!

Please finish this story!

Just want you to kno I STILL come back and read this story ever now and again hoping one day you finish it, your devoted reader, Kara

HOLY CRAP! I'm up until 2am reading this. My mind has seriously been tossing and turning on how the hell Legolas and Neff could ever get together, let alone IF they would. THEN YOU GO AND LEAVE US DANGLING WITH THAT CLIFFIE!

NO!

JUST NO!

You haven't unpated in 6years, so I know you won't be updating. Probably won't get this either.

But seriously. I'VE BEEN WAITING THE WHOLE BLOOMIN' STORY FOR THAT! HOW DID LEGOLAS REACT!

URGH!

NOOOOO! Cruel world how I loath thee! **hangs head in agony**

Love the story by the way.

OH FOR THE LOVE OF BOB! Please tell me he goes after her! Lie to me if you have to! **bites nails**

I like your story so far, I'm still reading, but I expect that it will remain enjoyable. Also, I just wanted to point out in this chapter Eowyn, after the baby was burned and she is talking to Raewyn, she refers to Niphrediel with her real name, not Cealab. Other than that, the chapter is spot on great!

She reads a loud? Wouldn't it take much longer for her to finish a book that way? lol I can always read faster in my head then out loud...

Hm, wonder who that 'yucky' man was in her dreams...

Aw, Aragorn as a brother would be awesome! :)

Hm, so I'm confused. They always call her a child, but how old is she actually? She can't be younger than like 17, right?

Ooh, ouch...bad spot to hit :3 And Aragorn doesn't seem that concerned...wow, how nice of him. Maybe she's fallen so many times as a child, so she's used to it :P lol

Sad that he is having Legolas watch over her...but whatever.

Can't wait to read the next one! :)

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amazing story. probably the best i have ever had the pleasure of reading. I really hope for another chapter though if one does not appear i will merely have to make one of my own up for satisfaction. thank you for gifting me with your word

~AK

can you start this up agean. this is the best lord of the rings fanfiction i have see. will he love her to?

Hello! I've read your story since a few years ago and I've read the whole thing many times already and till this day I'm still reading it! I really love and it's totally sad and wasted that you do not finish it! So hurry! I'll definitely rush to read your next chapter as soon as you post it up! I know it's hard to continue a story after leaving it aside for so long (I suppose?) but please do find a way to finish it! It's really a spendid work of yours! Can't wait for the next chap!

This is really interesting:) I like it:)

Bravo to you for writing 16 chapters of such a delighting fanfic. It's been a long time since I enjoyed a fanfiction this much. Not only your plot was different and entertaining but your writing skills are amusing. I know that after 3 years it's unlikely this fanfic will be ever finished, but at least I hope you keep writing (stories, fanfiction... whatever). I strongly encourage you to keep delighting others with your gift.

Take care.

I like it alot, okay i love it. Please finish as soon as you can.