when JACK said "right to our bedroom as possible" i was like WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUAAAAAAGGGGHHHAHAHAH MUHWHAHAHAAAHAHHAAHAG and ARCEE said "jack! he might of heard you" whaaaaaat!? anyways loved all of the TFP fanfics inculding JACK DARBY: MIA gtg now i have to watch cowboys football game

ok so i don't think that should happen but why and i think its primeis not prim as so next time more like 20% ass kicking 19% romance J.K nice job fakemail account below link not active nor is fakemail 88 days free trial please feel free to contact me at oh you know what i give up last time i did this some author called bullshit on that fakemail shit
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Great story!

please write more i beg of u!

What an great story please make a sequel. Have u seen the new season of transformers prime

Great sight scene, but damn Silas is a cockroach, he doesn't stay down.

Glad Arcee pulled Jack out of there

Excellent chapter. Fowler is a good man, a damned good man.

Great chapter MECH goes down and their base goes up in smoke. I really liked the interaction between Jack and Arcee, especially at end _ Can't wait for more, keep up the great work.

I loved way Arcee scared Ratchet when he complained about Alex. Now a very angry Arcee is going in to save Jack, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Again, very good. I'm really looking forward to the rest.

Awww cute Arcee and Jack have a baby 8D I'm loving the beginning of this. It's set up to be a great story :D

Wait... if they adopted a kid, does that mean that when he become a cybertronian in in a future story the baby will too?! Aswome!

Interesting start, I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work.

Awesome i cant wait for more

I can tell you enjoyed that military lingo, lol. Great first chapter to this story. Do you think you could maybe do a one-shot about Arcee and Jack getting their kid? I'd love that.