I like this story it's good stuff and well written but you gotta start breaking these super long paragraphs up. Those are killers on the eyes and really makes you just not even wanna get into it. This story has been fantastic so far other than that.

wow that's cool! real good real good! btw is this based off of the amazing spiderman with Andrew Garfield in it? I think it is.

"When life gives you lemons..." You squirt them in life's eyes and run away while they're still in pain

I love this story so much I've read it 5 times and have laughed all 5 times at the bloopers

this is so cute... especially that last chapter. I would've loved to see this come true.

That last chapter was beautiful.

Thanks for writing this. I enjoyed reading this honestly - especially with the bloopers part. I could imagine this story in a movie type of scenarios with Andrew Garfield's voice and Scarlett Johansson's voice as well. Both are very IC. And I can picture them together...you know ships and all? Cause why not? They're both spiders. Anyways, I'll be moving on to the sequel now.

This story is great! I was going to wait an review when I had read as much as I could, but then I read the Matrix reference and I couldn't resist! I love the way you have shown Natasha in this. Thanks for being awesome xx

You gotta differentiate between Parker and Spidey cause I had no idea if he was in costume or not. I assume he was

The bloopers part was a great idea it was hilarious !

Love the story!

I laughed so hard I can feel a six-pack coming on!

Oh great school starts tomorrow and I just know I'm going to be up all night finishing this! :)

So are they going yo be together or nah

Amen! You're are right about stories being rushed or considered carefully. Hope you update soon. Keep it up!