This is really good... now continue or face my wrath!

this fanfic is the best ever best one I ever read keep up the great work

Hay is a great fighter, and two great chapters ;)

Oh my that ending cheesy just perfect thank you I like cheesy endings :D

It's the famous shirt rip passed down the Armstrong Family for generations!

I am so happy that you include Hughes in that makes me happy.

Great job with the chapter can't wait for the next chapter

Well...

That was... AWESOME

Like, wow I loved it!

Update soon please!

Omg this was sooooo touching! I was laughing as Mustang realized he was like Hughes, but then I was crying when he visited him. This is really good, I love how u write hawkeye and Roy's relationship! Keep up the great work!

-TW222

Oh, gosh. You made me cry my eyes out for about thirty minuites. Hughes coming back was so sweet and sad! I loved this chapter! I'm gonna go cry in a corner for now.

Awesome chapter! Haytham was lucky to have Maes with him ;)

YAY
AN UPDATE!
si this chapter was really good! I luved it.
Such young love. *3*
So for ideas, You can have them reunite (royai and kids) and have a fluffy chapter.
Then you could either go to Xing again, or you could focus on Royai for a bit.
Maybe Roy's and Riza's aniversary.

Two cool chapters. Glad you updated ;)

I know that Already review this but I have another idea but can you place put maes Hughes I know that he is dead but can he rescue Roy, riza and there kids pleace If you can.

For the next chapter can you get Hughes in there I know that he is dead but would that be awesome if he saved everybody