| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoebe |
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Ricardo chapter 1 . 7/15 Stories that have oblivation and memory charms so easily used are trash in sorry. It’s a cheap writing method and wizards who are trained can recover from it as well as others around them should notice. Hermione, Ron and Ginny compotes serious crimes using potions and oblivation and yet their not in Jail or killed? Same goes along with Dumbledore he tells Harry is a horcrux and he just accepts his fate with no problems. Him being with daphne and friendship with Draco is rushed and this story in general is a clusterfuck of unorganized writing. |
stylo1 chapter 3 . 6/3 obliviations that make no sense as they missed like half the ppl who know the truth, super family rings that heal protect and what not, secret friendship with draco which makes no sense, heir to many families. sigh it has been done to death and its just cheap changing a story in 6th years and suddenly some pannakea that fixes all |
Nate chapter 5 . 5/9 Awful shitfic. |
noice chapter 12 . 3/27 very noice ff enjoying the read |
BillBrink chapter 24 . 3/23 Too bad this one is abandoned. |
BillBrink chapter 10 . 3/22 I understand the Weasley's motivation. They want Harry's money, but Hermione is well off and doesn't have an apparent motivation to kill him. After all, he rescued her from the troll. How did she get to this state? |
alice022 chapter 27 . 2/29 Whilst I enjoyed the majority of the story. I can't stand your distinct lack of memory. Minerva didn't know what happened then did. Luna dead then not then dead again. GinNY dead then dead again. Harry friends with mandy then barely knows her. Not good friends with any raven laws then sees luna as sister. So irritating. |
Pixie8859 chapter 1 . 2/22 My mother always told me if you can't say anything good, then say nothing at all...nothing at all. |
Bronze chapter 4 . 2/14 Oh just get the Goblins to return all the stolen money with 200% interest! Giving them 50% of it as a fee. I doubt very much the old fraud has that much money in ANY of his vaults that he'll stay out of debt trying to pay it all back! Better check on Arthur and the rest of the Weasley family as well. No telling at this point just how widespread the corruption has become! |
MavtheMustang chapter 1 . 2/7 What the fuck is a Harry Potter FanFiction without some cunt hitting or yelling at him at some point. Another typical doormat Harry it seems |
Cwhit930 chapter 30 . 1/15 Thanks for the share. |
WeisseHex chapter 2 . 12/19/2019 I DO hope that Harry had memories that involved the dickhead, his supposed Best friend Ron and his girlfriend Hermione! |
Gypsy Dreamcatcher chapter 30 . 12/19/2019 I love reading stories of Harry kicking ass and taking names, and this one exceeded my expectations! I loved it from start to finish. Thanks for the laughs and for a well written fic |
Hedwig68 chapter 30 . 11/26/2019 Awesome story thank you |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/27/2019 Sorry, I seem to have contracted a minor case of what the fuck is going on here. |