I have always liked o.s. and this was no different. I loved it! I love that Bella finally got to release her pain, for the most part, and finally settle on Edward. I know it must've been very difficult what with losing her dad & brother being cops and Edward now being one. That would be scary. Would have liked to know Edward's background a bit but it really didn't seem to bother him like it did Bella so I'm okay with not knowing. thanx again for a great story. ;o)

He was so sweet with her. I liked that he asked why she ran hot and cold with him. Liked it more that she didn't shut him down, yet actually told him what happened to her. Letting him know her father and brother were both police officers lost in the line of duty. Explains why she was so hesitant with him being a policeman as well. She really did get delivered a bunch of pain and loss in her young years. I like that they are on their way to happiness. You never got around to letting us know what happened with Edward to make him lock up the walls around his heart, and run from Chicago.

I love it.

Thank you for this wonderful story.

KnitBit

Yep, I liked this story! Thanks so much for writing! Mwah!

Amazing story!

What a great story!
Thanks!

Very sweet story :)

Shame that it is only a one shot.

I love the story!

Another great story.
Thanks for sharing.

loved it

Yes, you could definitely say that I enjoyed this story! Actually, I really enjoyed it. I'd really like to see a continuation of this, but it honestly ended very well, and a sequel would just be a bonus! I hope to see more from you two in general soon!

Love it!

Great story. Thank you meg