this was so fab and it was gadge i cant even
and im sorry its taken me so long to review, i cant thank you enough for doing this, its great to have someone who likes being on the forum
omg the last three lines i think i just sort of died
and gale thinking she'd be safe and pushing her out of his mind
and madge omg
just wow cate
and bonus because prory
anyway you are a fab write cate, i hope you know that! thanks again for writing this, love you lots like jelly tots

I think this is beautiful and well-written. You should be proud of it. I especially loved the last few lines :-)

Why, it definitely IS something to be proud of. I loved both the simple-yet-brilliant style and the interesting composition. Great work.