Ayumu-chan here!

I am really intrigued by this piece and would like to see where it's going! I don't know why this has so few reviews, because I think it's definitely worth the read.

I can see it's been a while since this was updated, but if you ever feel inspired to write for this story again, I would love to read it!

Hope all is well for you!

~ayumu-chan~

Please update soon!

Well, I guess adding a bully to your story makes for a great plot. I just hope Xion doesn't bully Namine, that would be too sad and dramatic. I'm glad Namine is feeling less lonely around Roxas. Could you maybe add a scene in later chapters about how Namine is abused by her aunt? I want to see how Namine feels hurt every time she gets hit, either verbally or physically. If you don't or can't its fine. I just want Namine and Roxas to be healed by the end of this story, no more scars on there hearts. Great chapter and keep up the good work.

Just read this, and I like it so far! Poor Namine, but there's prince charming Roxas haha. That's how I picture Roxas' role to Namine here xD
I love their interaction. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Ooh. Me likey this chapter. I hope Roxas gets good enough observation and discernment powers to know why Namine is so thin and pale.
Great chapter update and good luck on your test.

I'm so happy you updated this story. This chapter is really good. I hope Namine keeps her cool around Roxas. Great job on the chapter, no errors by the way, and I hope maybe you can get started on another chapter soon. Happy Writing's.

UPDATE :)

I like the switching POVs and the setup you've made for both characters. I'm interested in seeing where these characters go.

Please don't delete your other stories, i don't care if you don't finish them, i'm a writer (just that not of fanfiction) and some ideas give me inspiration, i love your writing, please don't delete them
i love this story, i can't wait for my little Roxas.

! you're back :D! D: i thought you were long gone! OH IT IS A MIRACLE YOUR BACK THE STORY KNOWING ROYALTY! BUT SINCE YOU YOU DID NOT FINISH THEM I SAD BUT HAPPY YOUR BACK! geez i could give you a bear hug if i could! and hey this story is pretty good no cross that awesome! I've always wanted this kind of story! please continue it! ideas... if she gets abused from her aunt why not let Namine have Roxas come save her comfort her.I don't know but something like that maybe you have a better idea.

Really good - I'm so sad now! How is she going to find happiness? By making friends? A boyfriend? By finding a new home away from her evil aunt - maybe she has a big sister or an uncle or someone she didn't know about? By finding something she's really good at? Like, I don't know, dancing, a sport, singing, writing, drawing...God, the suspense is killing me! hehe :) Be sure to carry on writing