I have read many Incest stories but this one is highly disturbing..

The way you handle the fact that Jiraya basically lied to Kushina about how her son was treated in Konoha is complete bullshit, no mother would be ok about it.

C'est une très belle histoire même avec l'inceste qui n'en est pas un pour moi.

Je m'explique, Naruto n'a jamais connu des parents pour lui ils étaient morts, quand il l'a connu il ne l'a connaissais pas et il jouait un autre rôle pour se protéger donc les sentiments qui l'a eu pour cette femme sont réel, je veux bien comprendre qu'il y est un bouleversement car ils sont mete et fils.

Et ton explication est cool.

Perso souvent il n'y a que du sexe qu'à d c'est de l'inceste mais ici il y une vrai histoire, intrigue bien entendu il y en a toujours mais certaines sont plus flou que d'autre n'

1 chapter of epic ness this was damn good just one thing in this AU in hypothetical situation as jiraya knew she was alive was he always going to keep it a secret from naruto

loved it

Its kinda disturbing but i think they should end up together.

Hmm... does he know that Naruto was a prankster king?
Hmm... Iruka never saw that happening.
Hmm... Thank you for this.

that was good keep the chapters coming

Genial hj

it's a really nice story ... very nice ending ...

Learn Japanese dude some of your words are wrong.

Holy cow... this fic is ...just wow

I'm am naruto x kushina... I say without
Shame... but this is the best on I have
Seen yet... its great!
Please keep this pairing alive

You should continue this story

so far this is a good story I think it'd be great if you would have a sequel that would involve his homecoming plus the reaction of tsunade and what she would do to Jiraiya .

Bro I reealy hope this story is not a one shot. Because I am just hooked to it.