this is great MAKE MORE LOL i wanna know what happens next... ur writing skills r brilliant

It's really good, I can't seem to find anything that could be improved. Good job, I look forward to reading the next chapter c:

I love it but btw if this is where she just joined then your sorta revealing too much about the series. I sorta shrugged off the Exceeds thing because you don't figure at out until episode 80 or something, but the keys were totally off. Lots of the keys came wayyyyy after the first series including gemini and leo the lion.

I've wanted them to fight for a loooooonnnnng time

cool story but can u make more nalu story xd

Hurr I can't wait till next chapter. hopefully you'll update soon. :)

I hope you make part 2 soon

update

Please update! This story is one of my favorites do far...

I love it :X please hurry up and update soon.
Good job by the way!

I can't wait for your next chapter this story is great keep up the good work :D [*3*]

Cool
Come on up chappy 2

please update soon its a good story 8)

I wanna see this Heaven Dragon Slayer! and Ohhhh, the fluffiness! EEKKKKKKK!

I'm a sucker for almost all of the fairy tail shippings so I absolutely love this. I really like the idea of Gray bringing Lucy to fairy tail and not Natsu. Their relationship would be a lot more closer if Gray had brought Lucy to the guild in the anime and I think you're a doing a good job describing how it would actually turn out to be if it actually happened. Anyways, I can't wait till you update!