I have never read fan fiction before..ever (I'm 100% serious). I stumbled across your story on Pintreset, of all places, and after spending days reading your story, I fear it has awoken something hidden deep within me and now I can't stop. I just want to say, your happy ending for Thane and FemShep, was everything I could have hoped for and more. You're also a very talented and engaging writer and you have brought Thane and FemShep to life in your story. Through you, they live on, and were never killed by EA, thanks for that.

Wonderful! Loved it!

I read your fic and i love it! thanks for shearing a beatiful fic... sorry for my bad english but it is not my first languaje. i hope you writte more lovely fics

Interesting story but many spelling mistakes and repetition. Good example is when you write patients but really mean patience. Patients are people waiting for medical treatement. Patience is waiting for something or someone without annoyance. Also a lot of paragraphs starting with Alexis ,thought alexis did... etc.

This is so brilliantly written! I love how you molded it to the games events. Hell id read this again just because of how well it's done. Keep up with that amazing talent .

This...this is how 3 should have ended. With any of the love interest...but Thanes story here is perfect. Beautifully written. I honestly couldn't put it down. Who knew a fanfic would make me so emotional. Wll done :)

This story was amazing, you should really consider a job writing stories, I would certainly read your books if they are as good as your stories on here!

This story is what I have always wanted for Shepard and thane thank you so much it was perfect

Lovely chapter Shep does deserved something good even if she can't see it.

First off.. THANK YOU! for finishing the story , I cannot tell you how much it vexes me when people suddenly just stop writing, i fell in love with your characters from the moment i started reading and i am sure that i will continue to re-read it every chance I get. You have created a world and a Shepard that too me was perfect. While she had some emotional issues, its a far cry from some of the other fics ive read where they basically make her sound like a raving lunatic. Once again, thank you! I look forward to anything else you may write, you have a fan!

omg is she pregnant i hope she has a baby im dying to see what it looks like

oh dear the answers will be...interesting.

oh my!:)

thank goodness!

She is confuse rigth? But hell she won the damn war what else they need from her?
And what are they keeping from her?
Mmm well I most wait