This is just bulshit if you have to control your own mc to not change story too much then don't write a fanfiction not mentioning that he lets sakura hit him it could pass when he was infauted with her bun now its pure bulshit.

You my man are perfectly capturing every aspect of the Naruto anime in this story.

I never enjoyed re-wreading a story more then this one.I am still waiting for an UPDATE

You can't just leave it like this story just got to its climax,you can't possibly end it here.

Umm... the flying thunder god did not leave anything behind when it was used.. even in the anime when Minato used it against Bee and A it was just him popping up and vanishing. If you cant even get the name right.. how how it is used then please dont write shit.

This story is the BEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSST

will there be more?

Just a suggestion Bijuu voices should be Bold. It's a common practice and something most people are used to reading.

nice job

If sakura were to use even one shadow clone she'd die, even with some training, at most she could use her natural monster strength with her shit taijutsu, it would be sufficient enough to defeat kin though

the hiashirin or teleportation justsu causes 1

dude it is not the teleportation jutsu it is hiashirin/flying thunder god no jutsu

when is the next chapter coming out, ive enjoyed reading this story very much.

For some reason the line break doesn't show when you first create the document. But if you save it then go back and edit it, the button should appear.

its very good and when u r releasing yr net chapter plz release it as soon as possible