Cute on a whole, but a bit confusing and it happened a little too quickly to my taste, perhaps you could have explained how he fell for her, that's what we the fans love reading about. I like the image you selected for it's cover, though. I'ma Scorose shipper all the way.

Perfect,just perfect

I don't think I've ever laught so much while reading!

i really enjoyed this... it bought a smile to my face! sweet and well written :)

that was brilliant! i'm about to go through your other writing and hoping for some more sco rose!

Love it! More love with Albus involved in the story :D

I love it.
-Cam

very funny, thank you