WTF! What the hell do you think you're doing, author? You better save him in the sequel, or I'll... I'll... I don't know what I'll do, but it won't be good.

SCOTT TRACY, IF YOU DIE, I'M GOING TO FIND WHEREVER YOUR SOUL HAS DISAPPEARED TO AND GIVE YOU THE WORST TONGUE LASHING YOU'VE EVER HAD, YOU HEAR ME? DON'T YOU DARE DIE ON ME.
Gods, I wish I could punch the Hood so much right now. They'd better be okay, author! *shakes fist*

Oh come on! Just go and piss off, Hood.

He better be.

Damn it!

Ah, hullo, Hood. SHITSHITSHITSHITSHIT FUCKING MIND CONTROL POWERS!
Why? Why would you do that. Freaking Hood and his freaking mind control can go stuff themselves in Hell.

Well, that escalated quickly. The Hood already turning up, one mind controlled Gordon and an unconscious Virgil? This should be fun.

It's the Hood, isn't it.

O.M.G.
Riveted.
And I cried.
A lot.

I...I dont know what to say... I am crying. Actually crying. Gordan my fav and no I did not want that ending for him. But at same time, it was beautiful... and beautifully written. the fluff was lovely and the feels were heart breaking. glad I read it... kind of. Wish I knew what happened to the Hood, because he wouldn't have died? Bet that wasnt in his plan. Gosh I HATE HIM! ... oh am so depressed now. I demand justice on behalf of gordon! Lol and wish I can get a follow up on the family reaction, even if its months later. But thanks for writing this, but may I just request a happier ending in future. Lol I know we all love a good bit of heart breaking drama on here, but dam it, gordon was just to beautiful to go. Now if you pardon me, I am going to go cry in a corner now.

Why...why give us hope just to rip it away? Please dont make me cry.

Ok not really getting this train of thought. The hood is in gordon head, but his body should still be in his headquartera... scott flys down there, and blows up the mountain should distract him for a moment. Or the big brothers going down there and kicking the sh** out of him should make him think twice. Or isnt there somekin kind of ritual they can do? But Ok will keep reading, see what you have lined up for my darling gordon. PLEASE don't kill him!

Aww this is so sweet. I love it!

Well, damn.

This is a rich read, nicely detailed and well-paced. I consider it a mark of a very good story when i can see it like a movie...and at the end of this chapter, I saw Kyrano pause, worry in his eyes as he looks out at the deceptive paradise...Ominous and a page-turner.

O.O... nope! Can't let it end that way! Although amazingly powerful, I'll be adding my own ending where be dies but they bring him back and the hood is finally gone!

Very well written and had me on the edge every second! Even though the ending wasn't what I expected, I still enjoyed reading this! Thanks so much for sharing this!