Please please Please continue I want to know what happened please continue it's soooooo good or really great

This story is amazing. Amazing. I love your writing style. Your grammar and punctuation is absolutely astonishing! I loved how you upgraded the boy's grammar and vocabulary! It really matched the situations that you created. The gang of boys have to be my favorite OC's, too! I loved how they had their imperfections and unique persona's. It was fantastic. When they communicated with canon characters it wasn't out of place or odd, either. Everything seemed to fit. I also just adored the way you enhanced Mihashi's aggressive side and added a jaded affect. It was perfect.

This story is unique and mysterious. It always kept me on my toes when reading it, and I doubt that the pattern will come to an end anytime soon. I think the teammate's reactions were genuine and realistic on the situation, none of your characters personality's or reactions were out of place or choppy in any scene. Although they may have been a bit more intellectual, but as I said before, I loved how you added that.

I am not very fond of child OC's, as they tend to annoy the living crap out of myself, but Mariko was very adorable. She may have been a goody-two-shoes and a Mary Sue jr, but I suppose that may be the innocence of early childhood, too. Children before they grow to be weathered and experienced. Before knowing of the true dangers that surround them. I suppose if she grew up with such doting parents like Ms. Reiko and Mr. Yoshi, that would be her personality for the time being.

The way you told us that the boy's had been stuck in the 'ring' for years had broken my heart, especially when Mihashi vowed to save them. You have succeeded in making me love Mihashi more now, and I had no idea that such a feat could be accomplished.

I thought it was sweet when the team discovered Mihashi's tattoo dedicated to the team. And the way that the gang follows him around and calls him "Angel" has to be one of the best things I've heard of.

I'm terribly sorry for ranting but your story was just so perfect and enticing that I had to explain it. Thank you, YaoiK-san. I'll be looking forward to your next update.

Soon, ne?

Please continue! This is my favorite story! (Please have Abe and Mihashi have feeling for one another which is hinted and please let them start going out pretty please!)

Please update soon! This is just to amazingly awesome to be left unfinished!

Dearest YaoiK,

I don't beg. No, I don't, it's improper and very unbecoming so I shall calmly ask with a hint of pleading if you will continue this. I was entranced even though I thought I wouldn't like it at first and now, well, I'm sad there's no more. It's not often I do this and I definitely don't beg, but could you please, please for good measure please continue? Only because I don't beg. It's unbecoming.

Yours truly,
Princess Rayen

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I love this story sooo very much. pls update soon

I'm dead. you've killed me with feels. I've literally had to scream into my pillow to stop freaking out. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! Thanks for writing it!

Kinda straying from the main story line of Big Windup... But who gives a shit? This is great, well-executed and well-thought, thank you so much for making this.

Oh dear lord please continue

I love this story and I love the darkness that is so realistic. Can I possibly make a request for one of the next chapters? Maybe a few chapters from now Mihashi and Abe could somehow get together and confess love or something? It seems to be hinted that Abe likes Mihashi when he got jealous of Kitty. So maybe they could confess and end up kissing? I just love their pairing. And I like Maru too! So cute! I wish I could enter the story and be his friend! Love what you're doing! Please please PLEASE write more! Maybe on breaks from college or work or whereever you're going? Thanks!

Hehehe... I love this...

update soonplz)

yeah... i'm trying to get into the story because it seems like it could be interesting, I'm just having trouble reading it because the characters are not acting even close to realistic, so much so that it doesn't make sense. I would recommend really focusing on peoples actual reactions to certain situations. For instance, if Mihashi was kidnapped for four months, no normal person would be talking all these things about getting homework and getting him back into the game. The first thing they would be concerned with is figuring out what happened to him instead of blatantly ignoring the fact that he was kidnapped. This big fact is too much for a reader to just overlook. Good luck on your fanfiction.

Oh this is getting more and more interesting! ! Can hardly wait for more! ! ! ! I really love your characters they are really cool and funny even in tough situations! :) As always keep up the amazing work! ! ! :D

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...More !
I love this story *screams this out of apartment window*
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