So good, such a mind fuck at some points, but it’s been written so well.

The first chapter was so i reread it like 3 times great story btw.

Over the top reactions. It's unreadable.

All of your stories are piece of shit , your harry potter takes shit from everyone but never give it back to them , I simply don't understand how people can even write such shits

So you turned the mc into ac occ no thanks.

That was nice.

you're not exactly doing a good job of showing why harry should at all be interested in that harpy, susan bones. as it stands with your current portrayal of Susan, i wouldn't wish her on my cousin Corey. and i wouldn't piss on the p.o.s. if he were on fire.

Oh heck, was just going to start reading this but I see you dumped it some years ago. Oh well, life is full of disappointments. A pity you have thrown away all that work.

Poor Susan

OK, why would you write the discussion Susan and Amelia had about the past, wherein Susan acts likes she hadn't already HAD that discussion it with Harry? She had that conversation with him several days prior to Harry coming to Bones manor. She was never hurt during Harry's pranks? Really? Step back and put yourself in Susan's place. Those pranks were emotionally and physically harmful.

I was really into this story until Harry started with the pranks, then the story became ludicrous. ANY sane girl that he treated the way he treats Susan would say "thanks, but no thanks". REAL friends would not go as far as Harry did, Susan could have been hurt badly in the "squid incident".

I'm surprised that they didn't arrest Dumb-as-a-door

The whole paragraph about Remus is totally messed up and unreadable. Many missing words.

This goes straight to my cringe collection, fuck that was bad.

Might the funniest chapter of HP I have ever read! Thank you!