I absolutely love this story! I read this ages ago and I can't believe I haven't written a review!
As always, impeccable work!

Dear Keelykelly you have a great talent in writing stories so I encourage you to write action barbie stories and I recommend you to write stories about barbie in spy squad again thank you for your stories and keep on writing you're doing a great job.

Its such a gooood Story. I love it. Abd its so sweet the Moments with louis and corinne. Awww. Sweeeeeet. You are such a good writter. It was wonderful. Keep on writing storys please.

I love how the story gets even better with the addition of an older brother! :D

I have to confess that when I saw the movie, I thought Helene acted a lot like Yoda from Star Wars. And then you write her saying "You have much to learn..." Lol

ONE WORD: SEQUEL!

Could you write a sequel?please?

brown eyes? i'm guessing it was louis *grins like le cheshire cat*

boll? :)

My 'best' friend Emily is nothing like that. But, she prefers to take the lead and boss everyone around. She is proud (who isn't), VERY impatient went comes to her needs and stubborn. Other than that, nope, nothing like your description. Btw, I love the story.

WOW.

Good story

Fantastic story! I Love it.
You are a amazing writer

so good

Hope her brother is ok not bad keep it going