Your take on Loki is fascinating and I enjoy reading how you develop a plot separate from the successive movies. I hope very much that you continue with this. thanks for sharing!

Well, I still like this story, so I am glad you are trying to finish it. :)

I'm curious about which part you went back and are trying to change. It's been a while since I've read this story, and I've always enjoyed it, so maybe I'll just go back and reread it again.

Thank you so so so much for the update and the edits and just writing this fic in general! Went back and re-read everything again, and its still as amazing as i remember! I really enjoy what you do with Jane and Loki's relationship, and really jane in general. Juts like whoooo bamf jane you take on Odin and say your mind you awesome stong woman you. Your characterisation of everyone is Awesome seriously.
Thank you again for writing what you have and sharing it with us humble mortals ;P
Hope to read this fic till its end one day and see loki happy and not dead in general in the mean time is more than a girl could ask for ;P :)

what a treat it was to see that you'd updated! another beautifully written addition to a captivating story.

I didn’t expect an update on this story, but I welcome one. As always, this is a great story. I did enjoy the latest chapter and I think you captured well Thor’s realization of the near constant rejection Loki suffered. Your exploration of what it is to be different in a “normal” world is well done. I think many of us out here reading your words can identify with that. The goalposts of acceptance are always in sight but never within reach. But that doesn’t stop us from trying to get to them, even to our own detriment and at the cost of our mental well being. There is only so many times we can blame ourselves before we inevitably begin to blame others and lash out. There is no acceptance harder to reach than self acceptance. That is what Loki is beginning to do here and you express it very well. Thank you.

It’s back! Yay! I’m so happy you’re continuing this!

Awesome chapter keep it up :)

Hey, I really appreciate your continued efforts on the story and your crusade against logical inconsistencies. Thanks for the update!

And what a cliffhanger! This is so well written and lovely. I wish so much for it to continue, and I’ll follow devotedly on the chance that you’ll continue. Thank you for sharing your gift and your incredible grasp of these characters. Your story thrills me desperately, sweetheart.

So well done. Thank you for a look at the brother’s closeness in this chapter!

Did you really just stoped there :0
Awesome story

Wow, just wow. I binge read this and I have to say that this is wonderfully done. My only sadness is that it is not complete. Maybe one day you’ll get inspiration, but if not...you’re seriously a great writer either way!

I’m so sad this wasn’t finished. It’s literally my favorite fan fiction I’ve ever read. I hope perhaps someday maybe it will be finished. You are truly an amazing writer.

I love the banter between the brothers. I honestly just love the way you write. You’re fantastic! This was a great chapter.