Reviews for The Longenst day
tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
Great job on the story it was good
levysbookshelf chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
You do know that rape can happen many ways to some rapists it's about the pain to others it's about the humiliation and the worst humiliation is to have your body betray you. There are things that can be done to the human body that the consciousness doesn't want but the body will always react to especially if drugs are involved. Other than the misrepresentation of rape this story was great.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
Why did you put a one in the middle of the story?
Gina chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Love it.
berry5tz chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
This was truly a tear- jerker of a story. You definitely were right about that. I found myself crying once Minato started to shove Naruto down on the bed. You just knew what was coming. Reading through what Naruto was thinking while his "father" did the unthinkable to him. Made the tears fall harder. By the time Sasuke, came back the next day and was talking to Naruto. The things they said to each other made me reach for the tissues at that point. Because I was undone.

I'm so very happy that Sasuke was able to reach Naruto in the end. Naruto, was still in there and only Sasuke could reach him. Yes, I'm grateful for the happy ending. I realize this doesn't have to happen in a story. But in a story like this you really want that happy ending so much.
Thank you for that. I wasn't sure I would fave this one when I started reading it. But now I've decided to do just that.
Neko-NightLover chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
sequel pretty please XD
raelle23 chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
i love the idea of a sequel i loved this story (though it was really sad and made me cry) but i think you should include some of the recovery process that Naruto has to go through and how Sasuke helps him through it
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
Please continue this it was amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
I love this one XD i almost cried DX
ElizabethLostS chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
I love it! I cryed so hard!
Sparky009 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Loved the story and the plot idea was different from all the usual things you find on here. Very good so please continue!
Luvis Blynd chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Sad but really good
Tealandgreen chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
I was kinda scared when you mention last kiss, i thought he died but then it said he went to sleep so i was like "im relieved!" LOVE THIS
anime perv chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
I didn't really enjoy the fact that it was Minato being the bad guy and did what he did. I was able to get over it very quicky with how well the story was put together. I would really love to read a sequel of this story as it is something a bit different from what I like to read, but in a good way. I look forward to reading more stories like this in the near future.
She.Drowned.In.Venom chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Please, please, please, PLEASE continue this! PLEASE!
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