you call this a book I call it boring make a better book then will see how it goes but this book is trash witch makes you trash the reason is because the writer is the book

THE ANGST. YASS. THE ANGST.
In all seriousness, though, this is awesome! I'm guessing this is a sort of 'what if Smokescreen hadn't gone back for Optimus type thing.' Unless, of course, you wrote this BEFORE it was revealed that Smokescreen had gone back for Optimus, which is highly likely, seeing as this is fairly old. Either way, I still love it.
This kid really does need to love himself more :P

PLEASE TELL ME THERE IS MORE! XD
No, seriously, I LOVED it! :D

Oh the poor thing . . .

This is such a wonderful piece. I've always love the relationship/camaraderie between Arcee and Optimus, and this piece just makes me love it even more.

My poor poor Smokescreen! My baby! I feel so sorry for him. I don't know why some people not like him! So not right! So mean. Team Prime you all are so not cool right now! All so mean! So un autobot like! Not like your selves!

But nice story thoug. Is there a sequel? I hope so! I want the bots feel regret and all for being like that to my poor Smokescreen! To me he's not annoying! Never he is.

Smokescreen got on my nerves, but you managed to make me feel bad for him here.

A very interesting and well done piece that manages to convey a great deal in few words.

What a brilliant story. You portrayed Smokescreen brilliantly and his reactions towards those thoughts are so believable.

You did an amazing job with this :)

Oh my god this was amazing. You said so much in so few words.