You know Mass Effect has target-seeking tech, right? Javelin torpedoes, the missiles we see the Geth use in the endgame of ME1, the ME2 Missile Launcher was supposed to have limited tracking tech (never got it to work, personally, so I never used it), and the missiles/torpedoes the fighters use.

how can there not be a divergence from canon when humanity has so much more power. hell that is one way to instantly turn me away from a story

I've really loved this novel and am looking foraward to the sequel. one thing i am going to mention is that you really hugged the main plot tightly with little to no canon divergence past how and who they did it with (powers and techsupernovas) and honestly i dont really care the story is good enough that even without a massive divergence that its absoluely worth reading and i hope you continuing writing the sequel

Oh i almost spit my drink all over my screen and keyboard when i realized that the supernovas think that by beating saren and sovereign that it would be the end of the job. I then proceeded to cackle like a fucking mad man they are going to be in for a rude awakening lol

Maybe now that they know how bad the whole mind control bullshit is they will start taking precautions against it

...it isnt instant drop worthy but it is obnoxious that some magical outside force is all of a sudden fucking with one of the main characters and theres nothing anyone can do about it.

I love this story so much at this point. I just wish all this drama bullshit with Ryan would stop. I mean really he just breaks down into tears and goes on a rant about family out of no where and proceeds to threaten Cole because "his" choices to fix the problem that he created in the first place are biting him in the ass? its fucking dumb and i doubt anything could change my mind about it. Although like i said in the beginning I really do love this story ryan just flips in and out of my shit list depending on the chapter lol

Oh...well this is going to be fun

You know i'm curious as to how chief and alexs first meeting went considering how alex is a walking virus with abilities uncomfortably similar to the Flood. I mean chief couldnt have reacted well to that.

At this point with as many mass effect fics with Overpowered SIs ands deus ex situations ive read Jenkins death is a running gag at this point like the carmine family from gears of war (they all die...everytime)

Why not just get Kratos and take the false limits off his power (his powers were limited in game because of player perspective) bam you immediately have a god of war in your organization and since you have other ppl acting out of character its not like one more would make a difference and you could have him helping out death worlds (worlds that are almost garenteed to kill a mortal)

their rage doesnt even need to be explained considering he used that bullshit phrase which i can only assume that means they have been brainwashed/programmed to follow orders against their will if said phrase is used

Ryan should teleported Kaidan back to the Normandy.

At least then, Kaidan's family would have a body to bury.

It is possible, though unlikely, that Mikhailovich simply didn't have any objections about Tali, and that's why he didn't say anything about her. Maybe she proved her worth with some of the upgrades. Maybe humans are friendlier to Quarians in general. Ashley doesn't object to Tali either, even while complaining about Wrex and Garrus wandering about "sensitive areas of the ship." Tali's in the engine room. That's the most sensitive area on any ship.

Hell, it's even possible that Mikhailovich managed to put together "Fighting a fookin' huge Geth army" with "Quarian Tech expert," and thought it a reasonable goal. I doubt it, but it's still possible. Huh. Maybe something like "The Quarian, I get. You need her for tech support, but the others..."

I don't see why you would be given any flack for making Haliat a Turian, given the wiki explicitly states that he was meant to be a Turian and that the animation department fucked up (like they did with the final battle scene where "mass effect driven slugs" turned into "swarms of missiles").