sweet as fuck. yes, this is a very helpful review.
have to be honest, though/ i got minimal difficulty understanding some phrases bc of the grammar, but it was tolerable. okay.

I honestly liked this one. I like your reasoning behind why Hansel sleeps on the ground between his sister and the door. It also wasn't as violent as some of the other fanfics as the others. Great job.

I like this story.

Your characterization was flawless. Nice work!

Aww! Oh my gosh, this was so, so amazing! Nicely done! This was a really good idea, so nice. Amazing job, keep it up! :D

I love this!

Omg this was sweet :) Hansel sleeping on the floor at first in the movie I admit confused me... but then I figured it had to be something like this lol Him just protecting his little sis! Daww it's too cute.

nice!

Could u do a tickle-fight of those two. I just have this feel of Gretel being ticklish.

I actually don't really feel like writing a review right now...lol... but I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your story a lot, tho! It was great to read it and I loved the idea that you wrote a ff; explaining this habbit! 3 Great plot/reasons! Thank you for giving me the pleasure of reading your story!

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please write more about this movie

Fits well.

Cute love this story :D

This story would grately improve with the help of a Beta. Sometime's it is hard to understand what it is you are trying to say, and there are a lot of mistakes. So maybe get someone to read over it, fix the mistakes and then repost it.

Very good! (Muito bom!)