haha :D
hey
i like this story very much :D
Sam, Dean and Bobby are perfectly in charakter
and your idea was funny. well, and dramatic :D
good work

This was REALLY good! I love a good genderswap, especially with the Winchesters! Very Well written, great job!

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WOW! this was Really good! way better then most people. and great writing style! i loved the way you made it so realistic and believable. amazing.

(Please excuse the "unsigned" review - logging in on my phone takes about half an hour. Bundibird is my username though, if you'd like to reply.)

This was fantastic!

The first half was FRIGGIN FUNNY - like, cover-your-mouth-try-not-to-laugh-too-loud-because-you're-in-public funny. There were so many lines that had me bursting out laughing or giggling wildly. Normally I'd mentioned few so you know which ones got me, but there were too many to list! The boys dealing with being girls, oh my gosh. Friggin hilarious.

The second half was really well done, too - the sudden move from humour to Very Serious was surprising and a little jarring, but it worked because it was realistic. When that kind of thing happens in real life it's not like the victim sees it coming. Usually they're having a grand old time and then some sicko comes out of left field, so to have it happen the same way here was clever and well executed by you.

You also wrote The Incident really well. Heaps of people overdo that kind of scene, write it tackily or with excessive detail. Yours was really well done. It was believable. Good work.

And the way you had Dean deal with it was spot on. You really managed to capture his coping technique, and the guilt that he would never put on anyone else but that "of COURSE" he himself deserves. You really nailed it.

In short, bloody well done! Great work.

Before I read this I'd read a whole run of good-plot-but-WAY-averagely-written fics, so I came into this with kinda low expectations, but I was really pleasantly surprised. You've got a really good writing style. :)

Thanks for the read!

Bundi.

Wow, that was right up my alley. I always love internal conflict and you did a terrific job depicting the psychological strain Dean gets under. My only complain is that it could've been even longer and more extensive. Complications in restoring Dean to his former self and the like. Anyways, thanks for the nice read.

I loved this! If this is your first effort, I hope you keep writing!

I love genderswap fics, but usually they're not very long. It was nice to read one that had just enough length to really flesh out the reality of the boys suddenly turning into girls.

I loved that you made them hairy, btw. Too many times authors want to make the girls hairless from the get-go, which isn't terribly realistic.

But really, Dean's experience and reaction to being sexually assaulted was handled so well. Dean realizing how vulnerable he was, just by being female. It's something that he never would have felt or experienced otherwise, and I liked that it caused him to look back at his own handling of women and call it into question. I imagine he won't ever hit on a girl again without these experiences hoevering in the back of his mind.

Anyway, this story was excellent and I look forward to reading more from you someday!

that was enjoyable!

WOW THIS WAS PERFECT how is this your first fic what WITCHCRAFT
Everyone was perfectly in character, you combined humour and seriousness perfectly and it was so amazing
Can't wait to see more from you!

OH MY GOD I LOVED THIS SO MUCH
REALLY I DID

This was your first story? Damn! I'm actually surprised because you got everyone still in character and there was no grammar or spelling errors, just, WOW!

I'm defiantly adding this to favorites! This had to be the best fanfic I read where the boys have been gender swapped, really!

You had me bursting out in laughter in the beginning when Dean was shaking his boobs and then had to go 'research' himself-er...'herself' more lmfao

I don't think I ever laughed so hard in my life from a fanfic moment. THAT WAS JUST ALL AMOUNTS OF BRILLIANCE!

Seriously, this whole fanfiction was just perf. I loved it. So much.