Good Luck with your school, job and life. I hope that you go far and enjoy every minute of it!

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it because it was getting good.

This isn't very good. Naruto is massively ooc. He doesn't react to dying, doesn't react to much of anything. He doesn't even seem to have many emotions. You do a terrible job making your characters emote. And when they do, it doesn't even make sense. Like with the chick getting mad because he drank sake. Why does she care? She's not his mom. She hardly had any screen time with him at all. And why did the lieutenant knock him out for being tipsy? Your characters are caricatures of people.

All you do is tell us what is happening. You hardly describe it at all, and honestly it's not fun to read that way. Show us what's happening. Describe things. The reader needs to be able to picture this in their heads like it's a TV show.

You move way, way to fast. Naruto dies, then graduates, then gets 3rd seat, then captain. He doesn't do anything to earn it, he's just given it for being strong. He doesn't network, really too people, train, go on missions- or he does, and you just skim over all of it.

Finally, a big issue in this chapter. They say their not going to accuse Aizen because no evidence, but they likely just recorded him. They have video evidence! Plus they're multiple captains and high ranking shinigami vs just one. And then Naruto just happily takes the promotion without a care in the world like he didn't just condemn all those vizerds to death. He is literally worse than trash. Kakashi would be ashamed. In fact, where are all of his friends? Does he even care about them?

This stor was really good one of the better ones iv read so good luck with school

That was awesome.

all the best for your future. Good luck on your thesis

Good luck on graduate from college and your future job in Japan. hope you think about all of us who read your Fanfictions while you're abroad. You were a great author. I wish you the best of luck in whatever you do.

Do you think we can expect an update anytime soon?

no duh

Is there gonna be more?

good development. look forward to some naruto relationships. hope some training is mentioned

I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to next chapter!

Keep up the great work.

Yeah this is coool
Loved the part with yamamoto and naruto

"Well, two in my hands, one in my mouth. It'll be interesting,"

No, it'll be stupid. He'll look like a goddamn joke in battle.

- Thorndsword

Man I just love Zaraki and his attitude "Meh whatever" love it can't wait four the next chapter chapters