Your story is so good! Please come back and continue it!

Hi there! This was a very nice look at the relationships between the four Robin’s. Damian is definitely still finding his footing and place within the Wayne family. People tend to forget that he’s coming into an established family after being told for years he’s the only son of Bruce Wayne. He’s got large shadows to overcome and that’s not easy for any ten-year-old. Had he been born into the family it would have been different since he’d have grown up with them there and knowing that he’s just as important to Bruce as they are.

I like that Jason basically puts him in his place and lets him know that people are tired of his crap. It’s a case of knock it off and be part of the team. They all have a role to fill and there’s more than enough room for all of them. On the other hand, Dick is the one who gives the hugs and provides the emotional support. Him telling young Jason that Bruce loves him but is bad at showing it is a perfect example of how astute he is. Bruce feels and deeply but is not always able of showing it so Dick makes up for it.

All in all, a good start. Can’t wait to see what happens next!

This story is amazing! I know you haven't written anything for over 6 years now, but this story is too great to stop on a cliffhanger. I love how you adapted Dick's back story!

Yaaaaassss

Why Is Tim in seventh grade and sixteen he should be 12 or 13

I love Ex Talon Dick stories, and combined with your amazing writing style, this made for a very entertaining read. And I'm also a sucker for OOC Damian, and you wrote him perfectly. You maintained certain aspects of his personality, like his attitude, but also tamed him down a bit (a lot, Damian's pretty... not tame). Also, COLIN. Colin was great, and then DC stopped using him, which made him better. I look forward to your next update!

This is awesome xwx
I love reading books like this, and this book is amazing!

Peace Out,
Liliaga

This story is amazing! It may have may not have been updated in a while and you’ll probably never see this but this story is still one of my favorites and you’re a great writer

Duuuuuuuude! This is amaaaaaaaziiiiiiing!

This is great! I love Dick and just everyone! the family is great it's sad that bats is goneyou need to bring him back already!but honestly I just love your writing style and everything about this! Please update to show us you're alive!

Please update

This is amazing and so well crafted! Everything just fits together into the perfect plot, with all the right twists that leave me on the edge of my proverbial seat. I just love your characterization especially of Dick as a former talon, and the bonds you've formed and display between the characters (especially the batbros)!

Thank you for the super lovely piece of work!

EXCUSE ME ...WHY ARE YOU NOT CONTINUING THE STORY? Please continue it.

Please update soon, this story is thrilling, can't wait to read more!

I love this story, I've been reading dick's lines in ice bear's voice.