I forgot one thing. I didn't get to see Chichi's reaction. e.e

Well, so this is the end.

It was the first Goku x Marron fic that I've read, and it was really good. Yes, at sometimes Goku made me really made, also Goten, but specially Bulla. I still think she needs some kind of punishment for taking Marron to Goten and leaving her alone with him (that was pure evil, Frieza would be proud).

Anyways, I forgot to mention something about the previous chapter. I couldn't stop laughing when everyone lunged at Goku when he told them what happened, especially when Vegeta turned Super Saiyan just because... He did the same on this chapter, I couldn't help laughing again.

Now, Krillin is such a hypocrite. Why does he care about age? Because of him, the Earth almost blew up and Goku had to sacrifice himself to save the planet. Why? Because he didn't kill 18 when he could.

Anyway, good fic, I'll see what else you got. I hope you have some Goku x Bulma fics.

Is Chi-Chi dead? She hasn't said anything yet. I wonder if she will next chapter.

Now Piccolo came to save the day, though I was thinking that Goku was going to ask Shenron the wish to cure Krillin after noticing that he had the Dragon Balls inside him.

But this works as well.

The "can of worms" has been opened. Damn, I would have wanted to see Goku beating the shit out of Goten.

Now I want to see Goku slapping Chi-Chi across the planet xD.

Bulla suffered, but I can't sympathize with her after wanting to put Marron through the same shit.

I really didn't like this chapter. If this was after getting out of the Hyperbolic Time Chamber I would understand why Goku is unable to control his strength, but besides this is happening after GT, he is in his base form!

Tell that moron all his truths, Marron.

I like the fic, there's just one thing that bothers me a lot, and that's not seeing Goku putting everyone in their places (breaking some arms).

Goku should have really snapped Bulla's neck.

I really hope Goku uses a Kamehameha x10 on Bulla and Goten.

Damn, 18.

Mad Goku is bad news. Everyone, get ready.

Man, this ever gonna get a sequel?

Not a real review I know, but just to make sure to give feedback: Excellent piece of work, one of the better Dragon Ball fanfics I've read on this site, even if a few of the characters are OOC and the story has a lot of creepy undertones, like a few of your other stories n' such. Overall, wonderful read and I like the idea you apply to a lot of these characters: Just having an inner, darker self. Such as with Rust & Stardust (also very good, though I don't think I like it as much as this one. Bit too morbid for me.)

The mildly bittersweet ending I think I like most. There's something weirdly charming about such an odd and honestly kind of depraved pairing, especially with the way you write their personalities.

Tenouttaten.

Wow, such a odd pairing, I didn't think I would like this story but when I started reading, I couldn't stop. This was amazing and very well thought out. I love the way you write goku, he stayed in character the whole time. So what happens to goten in the end? And what does yamcha and chichi have to say for themselves?

I come back every now and then to re read this story. I just love it even with the dark themes it gives it some real character. And it's one of the few out there that are finished and are goku x marron.