Zhat vas AWESOME!((I REALLY liked chapter three! I just freaking squealed...))

This story is ADORABLE! And um...maybe it's just me, but the part where Lovino was grinning so wide he was glowing, I got a mental picture of the Queen of England grinning her "the Incredibles' Edna" grin

Grhthdubshcgjvhc so cute!

Even better than the last chapter :3

Holy crapola, this is so sweet! A new favorite...

That was so cute! And the characterizations were great, and oh my God, Antonio, you sappy idiot, and Lovino's tsundere adorableness, and and and ... I loved it. Basically, I loved it. You chose a great song, too.

The one suggestion I'd like to make is maybe you should put in more description-describe the street corner, maybe, or describe the characters? Description is good because it helps readers picture the scenes you wrote. It's just a thought for when you write more in the future. :)

Also, a question: if you saw Antonio and Lovi make out, DID YOU GET ANY PICTURES AND/OR VIDEO? DID YOU? I MUST HAVE THEM.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! WUEIGTAPSOUvHB[WOeufb[OOUCGAIYQBEW9FP7CTQ1G209BU! SOOOOOOOOOO MUUUUUUUCH ADOEABLE AWESOMENESSSSSSSSSS!

Cuteness is nothing to be embarrassed about! Yay for kisses!

Oh my. I tend to listen to the songs while I read. This song has a lot of meaning to me. My feels are all weird. I'm seriously crying. I love this. :)

Great idea! I love this song too! (In fact I've had it stuck in my head for the past couple days) and like always, your stories are amazing! This was really well written and SAD! I loved it so much! Thank you!

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Zhsjahgskfgshs FUCKING CUTE HOLY SHIT *sobbing* this was adorable but now I'm starting off my day with otp feels _;;