no! it s just getting good.

pretty please write more, i cant describe how well this is written. I just want more hopefully you can continue written this amazing story

Owwww i was enjoying sooooo much! please pleaseeee keep posting!

like!

don't stop please xD

just demand a happy ending loool, i dont need such dpression... there are already lots of problem in real world

yayy new and fun shikatema story! its kind of hard nowadays to find another shikatema story, feels like already read them all! (of course, i haven't lol)

theres rarely any new stories about shikatema and im so sad, theyre like the cutest pair. i think most of people right now already move on from fanfiction huu they forgot how fanfic can fill up boring days. keep updating!

Gah, I love it. The characters are so spot on and the story is intriguing. Eagerly awaiting the following chapters.

Wow! Thoroughly enjoyed these two chapters! Although I hope that there isn't such a long gap in the release, I can definitely understand the battle as it's something that I'm currently going through with my own fic.

I really like the approach you took for your story in that you laid some basic background to outline the start of Shikamaru's and Temari's relationship, while keeping the story itself focused on the present conflict- the intricacies and challenges in the mission as well as the test of trust that Shikamaru and Temari can really put in each other.

Keep up the great work!

Oooooh... Intrigue.

omg i loved it

omg shikamuro what will he do.

continue!

I want to read more. A lot more!

I enjoyed this. It was well-written and believable. I feel like you stayed true to the characters. Can't wait to read more!

I love l

3 love it ! 3

This was great! The scenario of how Shikamaru and Temari started dating? I could definitely see that happening for real. Can't wait to read more of this!

i like it :)