| Reviews for Fragmented Grey (Working Title) |
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   TeddyBlake chapter 2 . 9/11/2018 Hey ! I don't know if you're still willing to continue this tory, but I'm still interested in it so I hope you'll update Fragmented Grey... I loved the The reins of Leadership ! (But I think you'd have develop a little more the relationship with my sweet and goofie Joshua) Anyway, good job ! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/19/2016 Are you done Winther it? Or do you write on another site. I love it |
| gilo chapter 2 . 8/24/2015 the rest...? :( |
| Conjectured chapter 2 . 1/6/2015 Woah crazy, it's definitely getting real now. I wonder how the whole unit will feel, once Max tells them that she wants to escape. And Renfro...gosh, I do wonder what will happen next! Can't wait to read more. |
| takewhatchaget chapter 2 . 10/1/2014 I remember reading this and reins of leadership i dont know how long ago but it's always been my favourite and i really hope its continued, i cant wait |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/19/2014 Love both of your stories. Wish you would update this one. It has so much potential. |
| lazybum89 chapter 2 . 5/19/2014 Great start? Looking forward or more! :-) |
| gizzy chapter 2 . 1/1/2014 Just binge-read RoL (which was the first DA fic I've read after my 6 year break from , btw!). Luckily, I didn't have to wait 5 years for the sequel, but do keep posting! It has been a pleasure to read thus far :) Happy New Year! |
| Yeldi chapter 2 . 11/11/2013 I've just found out this sequel to RoL (I loved that one) and I have to say that I want you to update. I want to know what will happen next. You just can't leave us there. So I'll be waiting and checking for an update everyday. Ans as for future mission locations, what do you think of France? |
| GuiltyofBadWriting chapter 2 . 10/17/2013 I love this! Keep it up. |
| Br9 chapter 2 . 7/21/2013 great update, liking the darkness, interested to know what is going to come. love max and lydeckers complicated relationship |
| LucieS chapter 2 . 7/20/2013 Finally! I was beginning to worry that the upload would never come! I'm really excited to know what's gonna happen now! So feel free to post real soon :p |
| Wholives4Eva chapter 2 . 7/20/2013 So I am keen to know what Alec and his unit have been up to while all of this has been going on. Love the action and the tension in Max and Lydeckers relationship, Looking forward to where you take us next . :D |
| CMT1992 chapter 2 . 7/19/2013 LOVE IT! |
| Poledra182 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013 I really hope you update soon! I read the first one and it felt like something straight off the show. The characters seemed pretty in character and you're writing is really well done. I'd love to see what happens to Max, Alec and everyone else next. Please update soon! |
