can you write an alternate ending where Maria and james die and we see sirius' reaction?

Regulus is definitely Orion's son! It is sad that it took him so long to open his eyes to the hatred of the rest of his family and Voldemort.

Orion really is a sick bastard. I love your OC of Maia. Your story is great so far.

NB BC

Is Maia head girl?

I'm surprised that James didn't case after Maia like he did Lily.

one of my favorite fics ever! loved the characterization of moony and sirius especially and ugh i can't even put into words how amazing this was. i couldn't put it down

Please check you're spelling . Also you wrote " Both married to men of "respectable" pure blood," but then a couple of paragraphs ago you wrote that narcissa was recently engaged that doesn't make a lot of sense.

I feel like you made us love Fabian and Gideon, knowing you were going to kill them off.

Oh god, I really hope you don't kill them off

I'm sorry, but i can't take the name Mark Chang seriously. I don't suppose you've ever seen Fairly Odd Parents? It's a cartoon. In that show Mark Chang is an alien prince running from an arranged marriage with a surfer accent. I can't disassociate it in my head.

Love this story! So hard to find a good James/OC! I love the AU. Looking forward to reading the sequel.

I'm sorry but your time lines are not adding up. Their first anniversary, Harry's first Christmas. for both of those to be true Maia would have had to be pregnant before they married, and she wasn't late until a few months afterwards.

Very good fic. Made me forget Lily while reading this.

Finally some more obvious James/Maia stuff. Can't wait until they finally get together.