OHHHH MAN HAVE I EVER SAID I LOVE YOUR WRITING BECAUSE I REALLY, REALLY DO

If I'd been alone, if I had let myself, I would be a crying mess. But my brother was there, so instead I've only a big lump in my throat. I can't even imagine what drove them to give up their little ones, or rather to separate themselves from them. I hope the next part is a little happier...
Brilliant writing. Thank you for sharing.

Aaaahhh this killed me, oh god.
I really like your interpretation of the TPS theory- It fits nicely and just, ugh, it snapped my heart in half.

I'm crying so much right now, i hate but I love you and you are an excellent writer and i cannot stop crying

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Seriously this is fantastic! Astonishing!
Completly...!
I don't even have words for that!
Such a theory! WOOW!
My brain is in shatters!

my me cry but I have to say I loved reading it

i cried... this is the first time i have ever cried while reading a story :( this is amazingly heart wrenching and i love it and hate it at the same time! keep up the amazing work, okay? T.T

Tears are going down my face.
oh man, my throat feels like its closing.

This is the lullaby of the lost boys.

*claps* It's brilliant, and it fits (does it ever). *bursts into tears*

Okay, kinda crying here. I just...I don't know.

oh wow... by the end of this story- i didn't even realized i was already crying. seriously, everytime you make a story - you go and make us readers feel as if we're experiencing their emotions.

but may i ask something? if rogue and sting actually killed their foster parents (their dragons) wouldn't it mean they have some sort of hatred /misunderstanding for their own parents (in which case, it's gajeel levy,natsu and lucy?) lawl. this OTP theory is getting waaaayyy too deep.

whoa. WHOA. This theory is insane- it fits together so well to- OMMMMGGG.
You have sent me into a fangirl whirl of terror and tomorrow is monday, what will i do! You may have given me the energy to survive school, if only to think through this theory a bunch of times. I have never heard of this particular theory before, OMG.
The story was so sad and heart wrenching too. I felt like i was going to break out in tears. Thanks so much for the awesome story!

I read your other two stories about the Twin Paradox Slayer Theory. Both are really well written. I like how everything flows really well. But compared to the other two stories. I think this one is the best. Mostly because of all the background details you have in here. It gives the other two stories more meaning and depth after reading this.
You're really good with describing feeling and emotions. I could definitely feel everything going on internally and externally from Levy. From the fear, sadness, and hope inside her, to the darkness of the world around her. The only thing more I would've wished you had in here, is a little bit more mention of Gajeel, as well as Natsu, Lucy, and Sting. I know you wanted to center this story about Levy and Rogue, but I felt that Gajeel could've interacted a little bit more. I mean, I know he's around, but, until the end of the story I didn't feel he was in the story as much as he could've. If that makes any sense.
Same with Lucy and Natsu. I know they're around, but, until the end, you don't really feel them around.
Other than that, great job with this story )

Mariel

omfg! i found out your ff in tumblr! and now i've a trauma with the twin paradox slayers theory too! Dx!
i just can't handle it! it's one of the most interesting FT theory's i've ever read! rlly and i love your FF

AH NO I'VE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS THEORY ON TUMBLR (and I think it makes sense) BUT FUCK MY FEELS MY TEARS THEY WON'T STOP WHY WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING SO BEAUTIFUL AND HEARTBREAKING AH