Very good and interesting can't wait for more

No. Because you, like MANY people, gave up your Death Note story! And a whole bunch gave up completely! So no, it wasn't okay, and this wasn't a positive review, however, the story WAS good until you ruined it.

countinue please I want to read more

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow, interesting! Can't wait for Light to confess his true feelings to L (and other things, I'm sure). ;)

I like the idea of Light confessing his crimes...but i'm confused as why he's able to walk about like nothing has happened? even if L did help light, i don't see how he could be able to walk around like a free man, he should at least be put in to confinement or something. ._.

This is great. Great story once again. Hope you can update this and your other story soon! I'll be looking forward to it.

It's so so so cute!... awwww i wish Light would already tell Ryuzaki that he loves him. Update soon!

Good luck.

This is so cute! Poor Light.

Awww that's cute.. Update soon. I like the 'an eye for an eye' line of L...

I seriously hated L's death... I wish they could've at least let him die after light died... Anyway... love the way you've written this... hope u can update soon.. im interested to know what'll happen next... great job once again :)

Good day, good night, and good luck. I still wish Watari didn't have to die. But it's not easy, is it?

I LOVED how L worked eye for eye in all situations. He's just that good.
I hope without Watari. He can manage

I hear you. I hated L dying in the anime as well. A lot of what lead up to it doesn't even make sense *annoyed*. I like the "an eye for and eye" line.