I don't know if you still write on this site but i totally would love to read a sequel if you were willing to write one... unless you already did. This was the first decent Ziva/Abby love stoey that wasn't mostly about the physical aspect of their relationship and was more about the family dynamics and emotional state of everyone. It was an amazing story. And i don't compliment writers unless i truly mean it.

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Once again loves this story. Just wish you would write a sequel for when they get married and when Tali can actually talk n tell Ziva and Abby how she feels about how she came about.

I don't even like this pairing,but I decided to give it a it was an awesome done.

Truly Amazing!

Such a sweet ending to a story.
I loved the comment about finding Tony a girlfriend.

Until next time my friend

Such a tense chapter.
Dustin's torture of Abby was crazy.
Abby was taking so much pain for her daughter.

Until next time my friend

Loved it.
i love how even tho Ziva was gone, Abby found some abstract way to connect yoto Ziva. It made me smile that they still had a connection from the other side of the world.

I love everything about this story except for the Tony being in love with Abby angle. I saw it coming from the earlier chapters, but it still irks me beyond reason. Loving how it's going though. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Loved the sweetness of Ziva and Abby's communication. Also laughed at Abby turning the ding down on the elevator. It seems like something she would actually do.

Upset that you are ending this fic but at least Dirty Paws is getting a sequel. Can't wait for it

Until next time my friend

Loved this chapter.
Especially Ziva's surprise at being called Ema. I hope Tony knows what he is getting himself into before Ziva or Abby have to deal with any of the consequences of DiNozzo's actions.

Until next time my friend.

I do feel a bit sorry for Tony.

HaHa! For once Gibbs has no idea what's going on.

I loved how Ziva and Tony are going to fight for Abby, Its obvious Abby has already chosen.
Im looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Until next time my friend

Such a sweet chapter of fluff and love. At least it is once you get passed a creepy Tony and a Tali that is like a mini-Abby only really creepy.

Until next time my friend.

this chapter was sweet.
Ziva is such a sweet talker with the whole "second best night of my life" part

And Abby checking out Ziva's ass. I laughed when Abby whispered it to Ziva even though Tali was asleep.

Until next time my friend