| Reviews for That Thin Line |
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altea321 chapter 1 . 3/31 Draco and Ron are so similar, I think that they are perfect for each other. Additionally I do adore them both |
guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2014 I don't much care for your characterization of Ron, he just seemed to passive in my humble opinion. That said, I absolutely LOVED your Draco. The passion and the love/hate was so fluid and in character. It is exactly what I expected him to act/feel in such a situation. Thank you for sharing! |
TokingFox chapter 1 . 2/25/2013 Ha! Loved it! So hot and the writing was brilliant! Consider a sequel. _ |
Blink'n chapter 1 . 2/6/2013 I don't love everything, I don't think Ron's words or him being quite so timid fit his character but I really like this overall. Draco's passion for Ron comes across so clearly, his moments of possessive aggression are quite enjoyable. |
FireAngel375 chapter 1 . 2/2/2013 Hey, its AJ :3 I love this- the concept of there being such a fine line between love and hate is a great one. Your writing is fluid and it kept my attention the whole time. The smut was well written and pretty realistic, but I can't imagine bottom sex would be very comfortable without lube. All around this is very fantastic, good job! |