That was a nice, enjoyable read. Thanks for writing it

no, why

"Finish that sentence, and I'll crush your balls." I'm dying right now. that's so funny!

i think that some people throw random crap at the internet to see if it sticks, you are not one of those people. you seem to have a lot of time on your hands (and a beta, cuz no bad grammar) you seem to use this time to come up with plot, character, research, etc instead of games like some other people. i truly admire your work and hope to be like you some day. also gardevoir is amazing am i right?

"The owners don't want to replace the machines because it actually put their drink sales through the roof"

that's an amazing idea!

plz make more

Please continue this story, I'd ask you to maybe a few chapters or so later, maybe, just maybe reveal Blazes dad.
Please reply to me.

thank you for giving the end of my summer purpose, it gives me joy reading this and i thank you for writing it.

That almost ripped apart my heart as I read this, and I am EVEN MORE inspired to write about my thoughts of my adventures in either Unova, or any region I want. So If there was a ratting from 1-10, I would put in a 60! That iis how much I LOVED IT!

I like this , keep it up!

I really like this story, I hope you continue it cause It'll inspire me even more to make stories of "My Journey," but if you want to check out the 1 post-story I made check my account out. Later!

Great story it needs a squeal though with the plot twist at the end and the lucario great work

YEEEEAH GOOOOO BLAZE! GO LORA! A happy ending for the two... I'm glad :3

OMG A GIJINKA (I think, that's what I call em) YEEEAAAAH

Awwwh. That's cute. Loved the story.