Almost give up seeing an update...had this bookmarked, but haven't seen anything new

So you promised the next chapter would be out before the new year or little after. That was in 2016! It is now nearing 2019! That's near more than 2 years! Have you abandoned us?

This is an interesting story so far. I would be interested in seeing the rest of it should it come out. I'll give this a 5-star rating on the story based on the story so far. You've got me hooked on this one. Very well done.

I hope all is going well for you! Hope that whenever able we can get more!
Who will Hiccup fall for Urzi? Sage? Sioya? Forget who you said.
Cannot wait to see the 3 end up in Duracia!

I saw the movie!

I saw a few grammar and spelling mistakes in the creed language and seeing as we're speaking of my native language here, I couldn't let it pas. Everything written in capital letters is a correction. Here we go:

"Wij zweren bij de vlammen VAN eer om NOOIT onze WAPENS TEGEN onschuldigen TE GEBRUIKEN."

'De' is redundant in this case because we are talking about a name, it's also much more formal not to use it. 'Nooit' is in this case appropriate to use with the message you want to convey, it means 'never'. 'Wapens' is the closest equivalent of 'blades' I can think of in our language seeing as 'bladen' essentially means 'sheets' or 'leaves', 'Wapens' means 'weapons'. 'Te gebruiken' means to use, it's just proper grammar in this case, otherwise the sentence makes no sense at all.

"Wij zweren bij de waterval VAN lang leven om nooit de order TE verraden."

'Van' needs to be used here, again, proper grammar. 'Te' needs to be added and 'de order' and 'verraden' need to be swapped to make it a proper sentence.

"Geen schepsel wordt achtergelaten. Geen ziel wordt vergeten."

Perfect the way it is, my compliments.

"Wij werken in de nacht OM het licht te dienen."

'Naar' means 'to go to', making just no sense if you want to sever the light. Use 'om' here.

"Wij zweven boven het land om het HIERNAMAALS te beschermen."

Nothing fundamentally wrong with this sentence but 'hiernamaals' is a much more formal ambiguous title of the afterlife. Your much more likely to encounter it in a formal creed.

"Wij ZIJN mens. Wij zijn beest." 'Zijn' means 'are'. Use it here to make a proper sentence.

"Wij zijn drakenrijders."

Perfect the way it is.

I hope you can use this and I of course mean no offense. I just thought you might want to know. Good luck!

It's been a while I almost thought you forgot the story. So glad you didn't. Keep up the great work. Until next time bye!

Great chapter, I look forward to next update.

Holy hell, it's been so long I'm not even a high schooler anymore! I even stop making long reviews too!

Q1) Are you still doing the Reader's OC submission thing? It's been years now that I'm not sure if you're still planning to accept our character creation for your story.

Q2) Shouldn't the creed language be in French. Arno is French (who speaks British accent -_-)?

Q3) Where did Melantha came from, I forgot?

Q4) How did Hiccup get captured by the Roman, I also forgot?

Q5) So is Duracia suppose to be the grandmaster of the order and kingdom, knowing that her name is of the title of the story and kingdom?

By which Oct 31 will the Hiatus end? Oct 2015 or in a day or so of 2016? Please i hope there is more! Just read what you have posted so far and want to read/see more! Please? With cherry on top?

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!

HIATUS KILL ME AGAIN D;

I'm guessing he raped her?

Wow this story is just amazing i would love it if you could continue it especially since it ended un such a cliff hanger

please please pelas eupdate soon