This was a really good fic.i wish It wasn't abandoned but oh well

I've liked this a lot.
I always favored Renly for King, and haven't found many of those fics.

Much as I love this story and it's plotline to bits, I'm afraid I really have to say this: Why haven't you updated for 4 months (more or less)? If it's school work, then I understand completely- I'm doing my A-Levels at the moment. I stick to what I said about Catelyn being selfish about Arya in the previous review I wrote because it's just plain selfish for her to assume that her daughter is dead, not just missing. Please update by the end of the Easter holidays. If it's school work that's stopped your updates then good luck with it.

This is a great story, even if I am annoyed about the death of Kevan, who is awesome.

Hurray, it lives! So the question now is what does Robb do, splitt his forces now that the vale support him, or take knock out the westerlands, and will the red wedding still happen (not likely since Bolton woud'nt dare risk so much with the vale on their side, and will this make Ramsy not sack winterfell ?

im very glad you dont mix show with books. i really dont know what to say, this chapter seemed as a filler.

Good story, when is the next chapter ?

Red Wedding upcoming...? Roose and Walder might do it just to defect to Renly, but maybe Petyr can prevent it if he's not in it?

I can't wait for your rendition of our favorite wedding. Will Littlefinger be in attendence? Will he survive? Will he orchestrate it? Will he turn the tables?

Update soon!

whens the next chapter going to come out

My current favorite ASOIAF fanfiction. I almost wish this actually happened in the canon version. The Lannisters are completely screwed in this case. With Cersei captured and Joffery dead, and Tywin down to his last 30,000 men, and several of his commanding officers dead-including his younger brother- he is at a serious disadvantage. Tyrion is missing and neither Tywin nor Renly knows where he is.

Although Stannis might have reacted slightly differently when Renly attacked him, it was otherwise realistic. Having him give the order to charge instead of holding ground finished House Baratheon of Dragonstone off much faster with less harm done to Renly's host.

You should really update with a continuation for Tommen's POV, you did him last time very well... you have to wonder how he can be related to the vicious brat named Joffery. I think his POV would be very interesting, considering that with Renly successful in taking Kingslanding, he is no longer the plump little prince who is currently in the sidelines, but instead a former prince who is in almost as much danger as Arya was in cannon.

Keep it up, and well done.

I agree with you, not your best work. I look forward to seeing the next chapter as i have now read the 16 (wow 16 didnt realize it had been that many) and am sucked in and waiting for more.

eh not bad not great... Did kinda like the add in of Tommen and King Robert in Winterfell but i dont think that would happen in the book.

This might be better than most of the Brienne chapters in the books...

Ah Arya and Sansa, its nice to see them back with eachother. Id say this is one of you better chapters so far.