that. was. beautiful.

Sweet. One can almost taste it. -

Leorio is my favourite out of the Fantastic 4 of HunterxHunter!
I love how you characterised him. He feels so real and I'm glad you showed us a side of him not many people see.
Eli is such a great character. Even if you did not show us a lot about her I would love to know more about this young lady.
Thank you for this story and keep up the good work!

very cute story. i liked the dialogue.

There aren't too many Leorio-centric fanfics here, so this was a pleasant surprise. I really liked the ending and how it talked about "now" instead of the future because it's the time that you spend together that really counts. You wrote Leorio's character well and it was nice to see the non-hot-headed side of him, unlike how he's usually portrayed. By the way, how did you do in the contest?

Ahhh I finally got to read your fanfiction! It's just soo sweet, and so pleasant to read!
Your story sounds just like the Café, warm and welcoming and somehow close and familiar.
It feels awesome to read about Leorio having a love story, or well, to read about Leorio alone! Gosh he needs more love, that goofy funny handsome doctor :D Eli is exactly what he needed, an honest and warm girl :3

Anyway, you did awesome Muse-sama! I hope you won the contest :3

I found this amazingly light and giddy. Leorio Paladiknight is the most underrated among the four protagonists, though his wonderful simplicity and tender view of the world makes him the most unique and sane. Pairing him with a simple yet intriguing OC makes us readers want and beg for more, but as what you said, this is a oneshot-a beautiful oneshot. I listened to the songs, and they're adorable! Thanks for sharing this with us :')

What? You only have one story up? D:

I liked your story a lot that I was preparing to read more of your writing goodness... but only found one story (this one) in your profile. Awwwww. :'(

YOU MUST WRITE MORE.

It's actually very well-written for something rushed. :D And Leorio seldom gets written about, much less paired with anyone (an OC at least), so your story is a gem. :D Eli is also a refreshing kind of OC: she's just a normal girl, not a Hunter, no frills, etc. She looks like someone grounded and will keep Leorio on his two feet. xD And while I'm bit of a LeorioxSenritsu shipper, I would like to believe that in your story, Eli and Leorio end up together. :3

I'll follow and favorite you. BUT YOU MUST WRITE MORE. :DDD

Cheers! :D

Gaheheh. This was a seriously cute reading! xD I looove the real-life shoujo romance-y pace and feel. hahaha. Pretty well-written, too, and I didn't even care about those tiny little grammatical errors over there. xD

And lol. Sorry it took me so long to read this, Added to the HNL C2, and good job!

Adorable.

This is simple yet adorable, just like shoujo manga :3 I like the interaction between Leorio and Eli. It looked natural... and she's sorta a klutz for not realizing her name was attached to her uniform xD

Anyway, thank you for taking your time writing this for the contest. I hope you had a good time writing it :)