So are bella and Edward going to have a little one and is jasper and christal already pg?

a slayer for centuries and first wound cries "mom it hurts". so much promise but ur character doesnt seem mature like i was hoping but more childlike then emmette. and lets ppl kinda push her around. But mostly its the childish way of talking and acting.

she acts like she never got hurt... Doesnt add up. Cant read when irritation facts are presented then igored for convenience of the plot.

I've been about when Jasper is talking about an alter meaning Major and when crystal asks if Major had one two as Jasper 'says something like let's hope nobody encounter him' so Jasper has another alter more violent than Major?

Want to see more interaction between her and Major... ow when she says that 'is feeling more hungry than normal' it's possible that she's already pregnant ?

This is a good 's just like the end of New Moon but with Crystal at all the events.

Hope you come back to it.

Please update, continue, and complete!

Moving too fast imo. Still, great concept. Wished it was a slower realistic relationship build and still keep to the new mate discovery theme.

Wonderful story! Would love to see an epilogue with Jasper and Crystal having babes!

you are an amazing writer i follow you on this website and also watt pad and everyone of your story are amazing.

How about not starting new story's till you finish the ones you have there are a lot of them I would love to read but there not updated in forever or finished

Out of the Dark & Into The Light » by Katara Melody Cullen What if Carlisle and Esme had a hybrid daughter in the 1930's while Edward rebelled? During Eclipse when the threat of Victoria and her army are upon them, they call back their daughter to come & help them in their time of need. But during her visit, she has to not only adjust to the idea of a strong mate, but to six new siblings only just learning of her existence. Jasper/OC
M, English, Romance & Drama, chapters: 29, words: 105k, favs: 131, follows: 166, updated: Jul 16 published: Jan 30, 2013, Jasper, OC

Found a story that was the same as yours, figured I'd let you know

Ohhh I hate Edward he's such a dick, c'mon what an asshole

Good chapter... Aw sounds like Alice gets to plan another wedding for Jasper and Crystal.. Can't wait for more.

great chapter :)))))))