Reviews for Shower Time |
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Jun Wu Xie X Jun Wu Yao Lover chapter 1 . 9/18/2017 б |
AA chapter 1 . 7/14/2017 A bit confusing, due to the perspective always changing every few lines, but in all a great short lemon! |
Faisalliot chapter 1 . 10/3/2015 My brother this story behind me (I didn't know) and whispered while groping the air "I can feel the gay" and proceeded to ask if he could read more with me. Now we're reading gay sex together. O/O dear God. Anyway, love the story, now I have to get going so I can find more lemons for .y bro. |
WinterScorpionQueen chapter 1 . 9/30/2015 I loved it please keep making more. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2015 DID ANYONE ELSE NOTICE HOW IT HAS EXACTLY 1,000 WORDS O.O PLEZ TELL MEH IM NAWT DE PJNLY 0NNNNNNNNEEEE ? |
Natsuki D chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 OMG *hands on cheeks and huge blush on face* I'm so happy I loved this story. _ |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2014 MOAR |
Chicken K chapter 1 . 5/17/2014 Whoa, now Rin has a super clean asshole xD |
Jodac chapter 1 . 4/9/2014 I really enjoyed this! It was sensual, funny, and just sweet in general. Perhaps a TAD bit OOC, but honestly, it was barely noticeable if it was even there. I like how Bon was sorta wishy-washy about actually "doing" anything, but Rin got him to anyway by the end. XD All in all, very nice! Keep up the great work! |
Fanfic202 chapter 1 . 2/8/2014 Amazing sexy gay perfect lovely and erotic |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2013 HOT! Love them! :D |
Inukyou chapter 1 . 8/31/2013 Delicious! |
Inactive-WhyCantIDeleteThis chapter 1 . 7/21/2013 So hot, I liked it. xD |
Princeofgehenna chapter 1 . 5/27/2013 Bravo! It was great I suggest a chapter two? Or maybe a sequel! PrinceOfGehenna |
MyBlueEyes chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 Hmm, sexy - I loved it, your writing style is very nice D |