what?

I had this same idea, but I pictured Envy as more Annabeth. Like, when she met Aphrodite and saw the brown hair and got all jealous... I don't know man, but Leo definitely works too.

Ok finish this! I love how you don't make Jason envious like most writers do cause he's not but Leo is and everyone forgets/ignores that!
Great job!

Really cool concept, I like it:)

wow. First Percy looses an arm and a leg (btw, how the hell did u come up with that) and now Leo is blinded!? Im a proud Leo and Nico fangirl and I will NOT stand for ANYTHING happening to Leo. Other than that the story is awesome. The charachters are so well described and their emotions are written so well, its like I'm feeling those emotions . Just... no words to describe it...

update!

relating the seven deadly sins with the seven of the prophecy JUST passed my mind. i love this, hope you update soon C:

Envy suits Leo perfectly. He should learn to appreciate himself, he is awesome!

what are the 7 sins? i forgot

I hope you continue, I would love to read more :)

It's a very interesting idea. I like it very much, though I think Jason's sin would be Pride more than Lust, but since Annabeth fatal flaw is hubris, it suits her better.

This is a really great idea! Never heard of a story like this before. Please continue! :)

That was a very smart one for Percy. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Well this is quite interesting! I don't know how I will handle Percy or Leo even thought of as sinful, but I'll deal with it, because this is a really creative idea. Let's see...for Leo, I think it would be envy

I like our idea.
As a writer, it seems more poetically organic. Whether that's good or bad? I don't know until you continue.
Jason:
-Pride (Sin)
-Humility (virtue)
-Carrying his ego (Punishment)
Just my opinion as well. I do hope you continue. Stories of this caliber are few and far between. It sounds interesting.
I bid you good writing.