Dude, the story was good, until you started to have Itachi's mangekyou habilities into Menma. Each mangekyou is unique. With the only exception being sasuke. I'm
disappointed, the story had potential.

Just finished this story and I could not leave this without a review as this story was actually really good! I feel like it could have been stretched out a bit more as some parts seemed rushed, but all in all this is in the 1% of best stories on the site Imo. Thanks for the fic!

lol ramen topping

The title is 'without hatred'. I assumed it would be a naruto that was liked. not you making his life in some ways worse.

Absolutely epic!

Their daughter better be named Honoka, even if she did try to kill everyone.

Fu#king loved it

amazing story

good ending, you could have left it off at an even funnier ending

"say hello to your daughter, shithead" Tayuya
"you named out daughter shithead?" Naruto

MAKE SEQUEL of sorts I have read all of this and it would be awesome

Dear lord this is rushed! I know you want to get to the meat of the story but rushing something so huge just detracts from your writing. Like the way you wrote them making a pact after being severely traumatized by an incredibly powerful genjutsu just felt strained and lacking emotion. Also after losing the one person who has ever really been nice to him you just kind of make him nonchalant and continue with his asinine questioning of this "ecchi" person.

As of now your characterizations are flat and bland though this is a good concept for a story you need to work on your execution.

I suggest rewriting these first few chapters.

-keiren

great story, this idea was amazing, idea you should use if you ever make another store with naruto having sharingan, susanookuramabadass

The premise as you described it in the summary was actually a very intriguing one. I would have loved to see a "For Want of a Nail" Naruto story with exactly that nail, and absolutely no other additions aside from logical ripples. Sadly, I was disappointed to see this story does not meet that burden. Sharingan!Naruto, with black hair, black eyes, and even a different name, snaps my suspension of disbelief. Why do people keep giving Naruto bloodlines they deem "coooool"? The canon protagonist Naruto is interesting exactly *because* he does not have any fancy dojutsu. Why not stop beating around the bush and have Itachi/Sasuke/whoever-else-has-that-author-favored -bloodline be the kyuubi jinchuuriki and be done with it? *is genuinely confused*

Wow. Just wow.

I loved this story.