This reminds me about my friend Lachlan, only he didn’t do the suicide part. He passed away in his sleep, aged 10 in December

I absolutely love this story, it’s sad but also satisfying same time. Personally I have to say I prefer the first ending because they both are still alive. Not to say that the Alternate one isn’t good I just prefer the first one. I also like how the first ending you have it in the same format as thoughts which I didn’t notice at first but then realized at the end that it’s a way of showing that it was all a vision.

it was a really amazing alternate ending but honestly i loved the original better :)

Awww...this was so sweet! It’s so good to see this story updated after so long!

I LOVE THIS AWWWWE

It's extremely disappointing that you made Robin act like that. He was nothing like that on the show.

The rest of it was intense. It would have been a decent story but the characters were OOC. Like, if you explained some other cause for him to do that, it could work. I mean, it's well written and developed, it just doesn't seem like something that would happen. Them being afraid of BB could maybe cause the others to do that, but Robin not so much. Sorry about the review, but I tried to make it constructive.

Damn, for the first 9 chapters rode me through a feels trip, and then the last chapter I just couldn't get off. This was good! Nice work!

Well that was a gery quick and forced 'happy enging' but, the story was excellent. It had me on edge, waiting for maybe Anguish to get killed, or lime an emotion war, but just wow! Robin!? Evil!? Ida never thought, but that was amazing. Ending was forced but overall good story. To improve on the ending, ida put raven talking a little more in detail about what would have happened during the vision with the whole team, maybe have robins reaction... Idk. Good story tho.
-SS

That was a really good story! I love the ending. I was sad that he committed suicide, but I liked the end of her vision as well. I thought it was nice that they were going to be together. But either way, they still ended up together, so it all worked out tin the end anyway. Thanks for the great story!
~Kakkarot is Kake~

This really breaks my Heart when I read it but I keep reading it!

(btw im not copyibg raven name, my names raven.) After readibg this fic about his death the first chapter made me cry and my bf was like "the fuck you crying about.." i said Beast boy died and he's was like lol you're crazy

Bello! Questo finisce in un modo più chiaro del' altro.
Sono bellissimi tutti e 2 ! ; )

Forte! :D
Ma... Commovente! :'(

Fico!

Bravissimo/ a !