This is incredibly bizarre, and yet impossibly addictive. I really want to see more.

This was a great chapter hehe couldn't stop laughing so i am really hoping for an update soon :D i wanna know what happens next!

I can't believe you only have two reviews. I like this story. Its just enough craziness with the right amount of mystery. I hope you post a new long chapter soon so I can read more :D and I wouldn't mi

Alright, so here's another review from the awesomeness that is Good's Evil. I told you I would review within the week, and I never go back on my word. Okay, I go back on my word all the time. In fact, I promised a little girl the other day that I would buy her some candy if she would kick a police officer in the leg and tell him her inner demons told her to do it. I suppose it was just so funny to watch that I forgot to actually buy her some candy. I felt so bad afterward I decided to buy myself some candy to make myself feel better.

Anyway, I know you had this chapter up before I reviewed chapters 1 and 2, but there is a lot of spelling mistakes in here. However, do not fret—I forgive you. I realize this was a longer chapter than the others. A good way to get rid of these pesky spelling errors is to read over the chapter after writing it. Do this at least once if you're a minimalist, twice if you're an average Joe, three times if you're a go-getter, and, I guess you can do it four times if you just like to read your own work that much. Also, remember that spell check does not catch everything! Sometimes you try to say hello, and it "corrects" it to hell. Sometimes you try to say love you, and it "corrects" it to halitosis. Other times you try to say I want to hug you, and it corrects it to I want to fuck you. Just giving you a heads up now if you did not already have one up you ;)

Another thing I wanted to say is that there is a lot of different things being introduced in this chapter. Naruto runs into Itachi's gang, Naruto discovers his brother is the leader of a gang, Gaara moves in with Naruto, we meet Kurama's gang, and finally, everyone has a party. There is such a thing as information overload. It is usually best to spread this much plot between multiple chapters, so the reader doesn't get too many different things bombarded at him/her at one time. I'm working on a chapter in Anatomy right now, and it includes nutrition, metabolism, body regulation, cellular respiration, and cell structure. I don't know about you, but that seems like a ton of information to soak in to me. Besides, splitting them up allows the writer to focus more on the interactions and nuances for each individual plot point.

Well, that's all I have for you today. I'll be sure to write a review on your nice little lemon later. Thanks for writing. I eagerly await for the next chapter. )

P.S. I noticed that this story has no reviews (except for me), but yet there are 5 favorites and 9 follows. How is that even possible? I guess it tells you people are reading your story but for some reason are not reviewing, so do not lose hope for this story. As you improve, the story will too, and soon the masses will follow!

I'm really liking this story so far. I just have a few minor things I'd like to make a remark on. First, is the spelling. A few small spelling mistakes here and there are usually not a big deal, but some of them are in bad spots (or good spots, depending on whether you like a healthy dose of irony). An example:

Inside sat a full class that all stared at me as I stood y the door like a dumb idiot.

Yes. A dumb idiot, indeed. :)
That was the most notable offender although I am fairly sure there are a couple more. The second thing I wanted to make a remark on was the references. Ordinarily, when someone puts a number next to a reference in the text, they also put a number next to the name of the corresponding reference in the reference list so as to let the reader know which one you are alluding to. Again, these are just minor things, and while I'm on the subject of references, I have to say I love both Skyrim and Friends. I can play Skyrim for days and not get bored. I mean there is nothing like having two undead minions who can each summon one of their own minions along with having the ritual stone that allows you raise all dead beings in the area (can someone say instant army?). And for Friends—Phoebe and Chandler are my favorite characters. I think my favorite episode was the one where Ross tries to tell his son about Hanukkah. Oh, a few good laughs were had with that show. Of course, I was only born at around the time the show first aired though. I just watched the reruns, so don't go thinking I'm old now okay? ;)

I am sorry I'm not able to write more on your story, but I have to work on a stupid essay (Darn you Literature lords! I'll get you yet—just you wait!). I promise I will try to write a better review next time as long as you keep putting up chapters. I noticed that you mentioned we lowly readers could request a oneshot, by the by. Would you be willing to make one including the ever so hot Kiba and the always so cute Naruto for me... pretty please with sprinkles on top? Wait, no, make that two pretty pleases with extra sprinkles, and put hot fudge on the first one and Kiba's "special milk" on the second one. Actually, if you can just get Kiba to deliver some ice cream to me (or Naruto, wink wink nudge nudge) I'll be fine.

Anyway, I enjoyed reading your story, and I hope you keep putting up chapters until your fingers fall off. Thanks for writing.