Oh god i love this fanfiction! Can you please continue please? Just please.. i need the ending.

Love this story!

Like the interesting.

Please continue to write this fanfic, I really like the story a lot, as many people, if you can continue to do it we will be very happy. Thanks.

Are Lee and Lilly going to reunite with Carley and the group?

Hi there, its russian guy again, with some thoughts about what I like, dislike and what will be nice to do. Sorry for my english, I know this may be painful to you :) but I just wanted to speak

I still think that the best parts of this fanfic are Carley’s dream and Lee’s & Clem’s nightmares. Especially nightmares. Reading the first one, were Lee buries Carley, I really shed a tear. Also, cool reference to 400 days and what actually happened in official story. And a nice, evil irony in Clem’s nightmare.

About Rebecca… Her appearance surprised me, she indeed looks like Carley… she even may die similar to Carley way, by friendly fire headshot. But… She so, goddamn, sexualized! (its fine in her own world, but not in TWD) She is like chick from cover of men’s magazine, when Carley is common, human girl. I hardly imagine their together. Anyway, I got used to it, that she is Carley’s “sis”, so it’s ok, but… well… I slightly confused about her.

I’m also don’t like demonization of Woodbury… I finally saw this place in TV series. Governor is an asshole, but his town is not so bad place.

Katjaa and Chuck seems to be alive with no reason. They are good people, but their existence is confusing. Looks like you just don’t want let go secondary characters, aren’t you :) ?

I think the story needs more action scenes. With Carley, using her marksman skill, which is important part of her character. Also, she must be in real danger, so reader could not predict her fate. For example, if you don’t mind - Last Survivors(link was in description of my Carley&Clem picture), were Carley was almost shot in the head, almost bleed to death, and almost decapitate by Michone’s sword. I worried about her, when I read this, and it will be nice to see those kinda moments in Twist of Fate. Or, maybe, this stories are belongs to different genres?

And of course, lovely Car&Clem moment! Mother and daughter relationships are match more adorable than father and daughter ones. So far, your story showing very high level of reasonable cuteness, and it must stay in that way. I count on you :)

Oh… remember one more thing…

Movie Aliens(1986). Remember when Newt suddenly calls Ripley as “mommy”, after queen battle? I think will be nice if Clem eventually do the same to Carley. Given the fact that Carley already calls herself like that.

That’s it. Hope my English was not very funny. Still waiting for continue. You are one of the best!

I am russian, and i not so good in english, but i forced myself to read your masterpiece (whith a dictionary, ofcource :) )
That was extremely awesome. I do like Carley, and she is wery nice in a role of Clem defender and mother.

So... is there a chance, that this story shall continue? If it not... that will be a heartbroken to me :)

Continue please! I fucking love this story!

I don't know if I can read this. Fuck.

Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update

OH MY STARS, PLEASE UPDATE! I know it's been almost a year, BUT PLEASE!

I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED. I THOUGHT THIS STORY WAS DEAD FOR GOOD. I can't wait for the next update now!

There are really only two ways the Governor has been portrayed pour dictator in the comics or charismatic cult leader from the TV series. I prefer the pure dictator to the Jim Jones type as Michonne called him.

Oh man this story is good! I've only been able to skim through chapters so I can't give a full review plus I haven't reviewed in a while, I'm kinds rusty lol. The inclusion of Woodbury is spot on but you really should look into the comics if you want to know more about it, like you're missing out on a ton of characters although the one's you've made are all awesome! I haven't read to far so I don't know if anyone else died besides Duck but we'll see, I'm looking forward to more chapters and welcome back to fan fiction, please enjoy your stay. XD (Seriously though I wanna see Martinez up in here haha)

I love this story so much, omg. Soooo good. I love the mother/daughter stuff with Clem and Carley. I really hope we get to see a CarLee reunion, and I really hope you get the chance to update soon!