1 more chapter you say? That was quite fast. Though I was impatient to see the ending as well :D I hope the ending is a happy one and if you don't mind maybe you can include the future where aya and dio have a child or better yet children. Anyway, thanks for the chapters

Hate to point out but turns out her mother was a psychopath just like her father... or even worse. She wanted her daughter to be just like her father. But father did not. It's just he tried to stop his daughter becoming him by well, making her a doll. The Drevis are just a family of psychos...

This is really good, and the May 23rd disappearance freaked me out a little, because I live in a small, forested town like this one, and my name matches. Also, Jean's disappearance is a day after my birthday.

Dear and the other chapter will leave us like this nothing else, and I confusing the fansfic.

I do not know if I will write well because I'm just learning English but I really like what you are writing and that you put so much desire to write, and I do not know if you read it but thanks so much for creating this little continuation

When will you finish it's been 4 years.

Oh my god this is amazing I'm sorry I can't create and ancient parents won't let me but I do have a little thing that I am very proud of and would like of you read it.
In the true ending, Ogre (the red eyed stranger, just like the book on Aya's shelf) brought Alfred (the father) back from the dead and into another dimension. that's why his hair and hands are purple. Ogre said "Maybe one day you can show this girl your homeland". That means that the Aya in the glass (who is quite curvaceous for an 11 y/o) has never been in the real world, meaning she was never the real Aya, and is a recreation made my Alfred to fulfill his desires.

And as for the theories about Aya actually being a good person at the end... oh I wish I was that naive... It may look that way, because Aya is helping Jean at the end and Maria said she is just like her father, so some people think that it means she got the part of her father that saved maria off the streets.

However, If you pay attention, Jean says that she was helped here by an old lady with a carriage. she hears hooves in the back of the house. then when it pans over to Maria, you can clearly see she has aged (to the point of being called an old lady...). you can also see a door behind her, (from the back, where the hooves were), the red anatomy book her father had, a small collection of dolls... and, to seal the deal, a ladder to a basement to Maria's right.

Maria tells people that there is a nearby clinic that gives free treatments, takes them there, and then Aya gets to turn them into dolls.

where is chapter 6?

Ok so I love this story but have you seen the "If" ending? Cause (SPOILER ALERT) Dio's actually alive, he was never dead.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Well now i feel silly

Pardon, but I have one thing nagging at me.
While I know that it's for the plot of this story, I don't think Aya nor Maria kidnaped anyone, if I correctly recall. Instead the people Aya killed were people who were very sick and in search of a doctor. While it's no better than her father, at least she put them under so that there was no pain or anything (this isn't relevant, I just like that small detail, cos it makes me believe that she still holds SOME humanity).
Anyways, just felt I needed to get that off my mind
Love the story so far

when's the next one coming out

thhhaaannnk you but please leave him dead now I hate "in your face"s

*claps* very good, very good although there are some errors in grammar and punctuation and you seem to change back and forth between past tense and present tense, all in all however, very good can't wait to see the end

wonderful, marvelous, I can't wait for chapter two. although I did like how he looked missing his eye perhaps just fix the flesh around it