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Iron Dragon Maiden chapter 12 . 5/18/2018 The Cullens are downright self-entitled and selfish here. Like, at least with Bella, she's been making noises about wanting to be a vampire since before her 18th birthday so it was following her wishes (and if it wasn't, HER OWN ACTIONS LED HER THERE so it was a consequence of her own stupidity). Meanwhile, Grace clearly did NOT want to have anything to do with vampires, stayed put and did not involve herself with the Volturri, and now because of Edward's selfishness and stupidity, she's stuck in a Sophie's Choice situation. She can either tell the Volturri to kindly get raped with a spiked pole and so condemn the wolves to a war that would kill off too many of them OR she becomes a vampire when SHE HATES THE SPECIES AS A MATTER OF PRINCIPLE. Basically, the Cullens, in acting oh-so-self-righteous about "taking care of her" when she would "inevitably join the family," have put her in a position where if she wants her friends to live, she has to become one of them. Talk about selfish blighters. The least they could've done was apologized for their role in taking her choices away and ruining her life. |
Iron Dragon Maiden chapter 4 . 5/17/2018 Nah, I'm pretty sure Grace's decision to live with her dad had more to do with the fact that he's a responsible adult who pulls his own weight and doesn't require his own children to take care of him, but do go ahead and remain deluded Renée. Honestly, I'm surprised Grace isn't more pissed off at the Cullens because, intentional or not, they put her sister in danger just by being around her. It goes back to when Grace reminded the self-entitled Rosalie that the ones with real skin in the game that could wind up dead are the HUMANS. |
snowbarry11 chapter 12 . 12/24/2017 Yeshhhhhh |
Debbie Hicks chapter 12 . 12/11/2017 13. Chapter then OW! Screaming OF VENOM CHANGED! 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BETAZED CELESTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! Too late CAPELLA CELESTIAL POWER! MAKE-UP! TRANSFORM ! MAKE-UP! Guarded by Betazed the pretty suited slier in a sailor fuku Of Telepathy and soul an d THOUGHT! SAILOR BETAZED IS HERE! Sakuras flying guarded by Capella the solder world of weild life the pretty guardian of Storms I Am SAILOR CAPELLA Now in the name of our planets we RIGHT WRON GS AND TRIUMPH OVER EVIL THAT'S MEANS YOU NEGATRASH! ARE HERE! BLINK! You'r Sushi that were with newest blood were still paler were with firmer ton ed athletic muscles were tough b eautfiul women an d strong men oh my god she what they con verted to animals are on a m illtary diet of as all n ow young grew up along followed with us blown freely with all of them poison ed then was too late lost from here but brought here they are Vegetairans b ut died here good rid as all now then too late the dam ages did to us b ecame more fit were on a United States space colon ial m ariner diet trained with weaponry were all Starfleet storn g were enlisted officers were as all were dressed hair were back were not norm al born with teeth and sharper canin es they are not n orm al yeen agers are adults in reversrse oh m y god were Huntresses of Artemis with Hunters of Ares then POPPED With them n ulled senses then too late cam e too later b rought here they were train ed and taught are more civlized are tamed are forbidden to do at night they were killed good rid of them now m ore as all of them then too late pun ished violen tly blown freely as all of them with as all of packs then Bree wore a belty from the 1980 movie with sais of poison b ecam e her tem then suddenly it was too late used a b ull whip then CRASHED From here lost from here as all of b rought here killed now too later had a host then lost blod then were n o lon ger us/them as all of them Bree great b elt don't get near me I Am poison oh my god you are trained oh it's from Flash Gordon min e is from Indiana Jon es 1934 bullwhip yikes so my own we are immortal what are you watchers then news raged onwards then they are immortal people newest lives they took care of them b lown lost heads good b ring them then ourselves felt streranger than nomal were not alive then witn essed a burial was a funeral myself was undead so herselfbut a fake body with hair good choice with clothes stir add water boil then free ding oh man it's working looked fake they are grieving of us then left in White rob es s orrowfully were Priestesses and Executors Momma mia Strom she held sway over death so they thenpopped freely then aboard then it was as all of them forced the tribe pack ourselves with women held turn ed up hands we smelt of oils are religious Nativ e American on es then All merged wth other as all blown with ity mixed then families weere here then then blown apart with both as all of it destroyed with us/as all then blown as a starship then blown were not there onto Earth Warped from here Nuked while frozen solid then then lost bodies were as all suddenly using m y powers it descended but preparing to land like the Enterprise D then myself with women with m y own sister was singing from Falor's Journey was a good song from Tuvok himself the Vulcan first officer sighten my sister remained chaste to Artemis his friend you must not touch a mated Woman both are ordained Acolytes of Moun t Seleya of Gol What?! 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What we are landing Captain excuse me please oh no she is what a priestess good god we need to feed now then it landed then ourselves with horns were a blaring Vulcan s stan ding within was William Black their diabetic father with all with help odf alien women were a dozen ourselves were new to religious life were deeply spiritual devout to the gods an d goddesses but were very holiest women passed a test but wwere loyal tio the Priestesses who take n book Vulcan women names were different then just on e moonless night easy with him where's m y eyes you are blind it's blindness you sure my sister was more logical with Surak young lady your katra is old yes of a adult Hi there then oops then found it he needs food to keep him alive ugh forgot my pills then news of them had kids aboard then now forbidden Hold it Garrett herself was stronger knocked him out by the Vulcan Nerve pinch non violently ouch good god yikes Vulcan priestesses look we lost a world it's Us Kindred then now as all both three were changed now no longer here blown from bodies brought within both nuked freely then brought the very all of them killed werwe as all blown guards now took from here blown apart n o longer there at all but as all of them. |
dramaqueen452 chapter 12 . 11/7/2017 Please tell me that u haven't abandoned this. I love this so much. Urgh Bella does my head in. It always bugged me how she seemed to be so ready to just drop her family for her vampires |
Shriya chapter 12 . 5/19/2017 Now Grace is the best twilight character so far. She is not fazed by love and crap. And she is practical af not taking shit from cullens (cough, edward) and pleaseeeeeeeeeee... Continue! I really love the story you have come up with. |
carmenotaku98 chapter 12 . 1/4/2017 Conti , plis? |
Jj chapter 12 . 9/15/2016 Pls update |
Rose099 chapter 12 . 3/1/2016 Update |
sbritt264 chapter 12 . 12/24/2015 update! i love this story! |
x XRoweenaJAugustineX x chapter 12 . 8/12/2015 I have to admit, I love that Grace is not giving Bella or the Cullen's any room to apologize and is steadfast in her anger, because she believes she is right. I like that about her character. She isn't a push over and believes what she believes and doesn't let anybody tell her different, or persuade her with kindness or facts. :D |
Debbie Hicks chapter 12 . 7/17/2015 13. Chapter 13. Jake DON'T DO THIS That he Ripped my own Skin but Changed me by Sending the Drugged Life-Saving thing right in my own Teenage body then I Exploded a Truest burt of purest Energy then suddenly the Great Goddess Queen Serenity Blessed me with True Bitter Immortality Ancient Beauty and Superstrength and Grace and Superspeed and Elegance and all of the Superior hearing and eyesight and Brain but I Sighted her my own sister that I Screamed loudly BELLA I WANT HER NOW! I WAs going Ceaziest and suddenly myself was really in big Trouble then Flashed then Bit onto her Wrists toio hardest then smashed with the crystalized teeth and fangs then drank with a gusto then a Witness ran and reported to the Volturi palace about my deathly heritage Aro there is a Federation manner it is Grace Swan age forever 15 to 16 years old Bit her Bodysuited sister drained as all the replicated Blood of all of human blood who Turned her Jacob Black as her source of transformation is unstable but uncontrollable at a the cursed age of 15 Did to Tribal Children wearing but Created as all Immortal Children a speakable crime that it happened to me and all of the sudden I was so out of phase but was very hurt but unable breathe then it happened You there that one who turned her and this that one then it happened Jacob Black she is Lying! EXECUTE HER FELIX! I Screamed loudly my very short but Second life had ended with him forever That I was brutally murdering a sicken crunch with the rest of the Guards But with the Cullens/Covens/Tribes/Packs all of them were killed but with each both our Carnivorous selves/there own tested were all of them Bonded that year to Aro but it happened to the Families and friends with the very on board Loved ones with as all of them but it happened Destroyed as all of them more than all of them suddenly reappeared from each both frozen bodies and they with each both were more of them with hybrids all of them saved with runaways and all of them shattering from here but myself healed very differently so my own sister as well of our own best friends Alice they Woke up without all memories of their human lives with as all of them Where am I can't remember my own name and my family anymore what am Grance Swan you were Tortured by Jane of the Volturi and Felix of the Volturi killed you as all of you and you are unable to go to school your deathly heritage is out born with teeth and canine teeth they are called fangs you are a hybrid of both traits ended up Destroyed but reincarnated but Resurrected but the as all half taken away with your sister is resting but feels Hallow bit her with Immortality Beauty Grace and superstrength and superspeed and Enhanced senses and superior hearing and eyesight and superior mind and brain you are Gifted of Physical shield use mind control Child of Dracula are a Vampire Slayer you will not age nor grow old you will be in the same cursed but unchanged and undead 15 year old body Carlisle she and her sister with their best friends are the Embraced in other words Kindred you Intergalactic Lycans are unable to die out and you can't have children but your women birthed your last ones it came too late myself was a Vampire slayer-Human so they I tested out my true powers of mine dressed in a Kimono my hair was styled in bangs and sides suddenly releasing a Real flame onto my own hand was hoographic it became a true Fir of Vengeance a official power source it really did happened to me I unleashed my true nature by using my own powers to bind others with my own Physical Shield used Mind Control to control animals and people my own Deadly Golden eyes of Doom and Death I was Avenged was dressed like Miyu no shoes our socks only a ribbon on my foot and ankle posed in a Mournful but funeral way my hair was longer in a side ball but a human freaked out of my own Cosmic flame V-VAMPIRE! He fled in terror of my own eyes of golden Stop Don't Enter our world Mortal who are you Miyu I am a Royal Vampire princess what you hunt I Send Shimna in the Dark are wicked if you are worthy to cross the Land of Night it was too late he sighted our Bones but fled in horrified screams of terror then reported a Death on Earth the human were next the last half were aboard but freed of their bones with both were all Judged by my own sister who made them her servants who were within here but it happened shattering freely but the Vampires sighted Maggots decaying too hardest but it happened took the homes as all of them suddenly with his bones but much as all of guards ripped outside but took away the rights and law here onto Vulcan were now a lot of Vampires but the bones were all tribazillions-trimazillions of ashes but dust Marking them onto their foreheads it was their own punishment from ourselves they were forbidden to be destroyed. |
Debbie Hicks chapter 12 . 7/17/2015 13. Chapter 13. Um Jake yeah watch it don't do this then my own Scream was Heard was Myself thrown outside with a bleeding neck with Bella's bleeding that the Police found Completely deceased teenagers brought in for treatment suddenly our Screams were Heard our Flaking of our own skins then suddenly our replication of our galloping hearts and a very strange but burning fire kept our heart it happened the Bodysuits Clicked a Alarm our replication of with as their and our own hearts stopped officially then I found my voice then suddenly Screaming for real Alice my own neck Bled forever then I Died here signaling a Changing heart my own replicated Changing heart with them Shrieking if Transforming as hard I went into the Cooling but iciest cold stage then my Screams with their screams was heard but suddenly my Replicated heart just stopped with their own replicated hearts wre flatlined I was motionless but it happened to me the Marking was real by a newly-phased Jake Black Finally spoke to the great Goddess of the Moon Kingdom Queen Serenity finally but officially Cursed me with Bitter Immortality and Speed and Superstrength and Enhanced senses and Superior hearing and Beauty and Grace and Superior eyesight and a Terrifying gift with a Healing factor healing it Finally Exploding right outside of myself with a Terrifying noise Roaring by Signal my Reincarnation a truest one suddenly Cracked True Falkor's Ruby Red Eyes then suddenly I was Jolted then Attacked with a force of my Superior strength hissing calm her down I found my own voice Wha-What you do to me Jake you Bit me too forcely you are Drugged with oh god I don't feel well Don't get near me I am warning you that it happened to me I was really terrified but totally dazed and really Confused but Suddenly lost my of the humanity with their Alice what you did to the both they wre stopped with their Screaming then These ones broken our law RIP THEM ALIVE FELIX! Then I was Fully-Completely Murdered with her with them with Allies and three Pack by Tearing with mated Imprints then suddenly tore our/their own heads off then Cursing me/they with Death but it happened with them Gone with our own but it happened Exploding with the IVF Hybrids all of the Sudden they brought the Prizes then with the bodies Msters these two broken as all of our rules with the others Will Be Condemned to death and what the Charges Exposure DEATH! Their Screams were more louder then had their Second Guards bind the both they need human blood then it came too late they all of turned as all of of Iitalians into Vampires and all of the Sudden Exploding free so free by blowing them up with a viral bioweapon to his own sister deceased created a disease but reported we are yours bound to you Masters they Shattering as all of tribazillions and mazillions and much many more as all of them but went a blazing flames were as all he desired a Army of all Volturi members bound to him and the Volturi but suddenly burst outside but they sped took them Away then Alice help me Jim take me home to Vulcan to climb the steps of Mt. Seleya in the hall of Ancient Thought CARLISLE! That I was Murdered with my own sister and our best friends She has a Power it is Physical Shield they can't have Children but their own sleep patterns are Different now she can't Die of the Imprint still burned in her Changed blood and they burst outside never Went old at All that was it we never went old or it caused our now granite skins but breaking outside with the five races Vanishing the right into acidic lead and chemo with all of the newest children all drugged but Cursed with freed hybrids burst outside but it went too wrong ourselves were not human at all but the Embraced all of the bodies were into lead and Chemo but freeing their own more Monstrous and second Guards as all of it took the Human and Vulcan blood for themselves they all Exploded but with as all of youths and young were all fully grown by now but more mature declaring them Extinct had them all into bad stuff and more of them into then a third but as all of them Ripped the groins but as all of them they too joined the Volturi but blew themselves apart then more as all of them made us and them Infertile but it came too late the bodies were died up bled-up Corpses all deceased but it happened Alice had a More Thunderous Vision then Exploding like a dying planetary star solar system oh my GOD! Volturi they are coming about you and they with more members are with cursed powers and with wives and the senior both and Assassins with the kings about you Grace you are not normal with your own sister with the best friends are Human-Extraterrestrial hybrids not from Earth from other planets your mother had a affair with a Alien wearing pointed ears all of you are half-human and half-Vulcan their eye color went Golden brown are fused had Artistic Upswept but slanted eyebrows their blood it's Green the Volturi heard this about our Alien heritage from a planet and world known as the planet Vulcan had pointed ears and Artistic slanted eyebrows paler skins were sallow but thin was on a Vegetarian diet of both to stay alive my new hair was styled in a Vulcan cut mid-longer but short I looked in my early twenties I Was Somber but in the robes of a Vulcan woman so they as well Guys we can't die now and it made us Extremely long lived humanoids I can't go to High school as a Vulcan female of my own glued pointed ears and my green blood burned hot as the Fire plains of Gol Sir! she looks like us with them from the 2009 movie of Star Trek of Vulcan's destruction by Nero a Mad but Crazed Romulan is driven in Grief and Vengeance let use this for ourselves to cope with our death then it happened the families and friends with loved ones all of them doped who burst outside with ourselves and five with as all both but it happened with the remains with the Supernatural but it went too wrong finally burst freely but Vanishing now humanity is Extremely long lived but snapped freely of the bodies Vanishing each both then it happened they were all Killed but flayed but Extinct our species but made us/as all of them Immortal my gift bound them to the United States of America as Americans forever but they too the homes from them but ourselves remained calm as the Still seas became Stoic but fiercer but loyal but strictly true to our newest race the Kindred was a offshoot of the Vampire species we were serene but non-violent but used you guessed it Surak's way of Pure Logic converted by himself but it had a fatal side affect losing as all of bodies to them but it happened as all of the cities vanishing with as all both people and both Aboard from the bodies with cities all of them but it deported us/them to Vulcan but the Vampires erupted freely but found more members now it's taken. |
flicka147000 chapter 12 . 7/18/2015 Can't wait to read more. Please update soon. |
d112hpfan chapter 12 . 7/17/2015 Grace sounds pissed at Bella. She should be. I would so too. Throwing her life away like that. At least she has Jake now. |