Oh My freaking gosh! Please update soon!

I am enthralled with this story! You have got to update soon!

I have read a couple of your other fics and I am hooked to your writing style! This one however, has me not only begging for more, but completely enamored; its all I have thought about today! Please update soon!

Oh man this just keeps getting better and better. I love it

First and for most I loved the chapter but as I was reading it. I was like am i reading the right story or did something else happen and I got totally confused but then at the end her comes Torren and explained everything. So I can't wait to see what you will do next. So please keep up the great work and post more soon.

This girl is determined to get what she wants no matter what she has to do to get it. But the chapter was really good and I can't wait to read the next one.

That was an interesting chapter but I loved it none the less and I can't wait to see what the next one will bring to the story.

Hey I loved what you got going on so far and I can't wait to see what you have in-store for the next chapter. Also I was glad to see you wrote another story with Randy in it.

Do thine eyes deceive me? An update! I am happy now.

Maia sounds like she'll be an interesting character to watch evolve as the story progresses. I'm curious to see how she will throw a monkey wrench into Torren's crazy, obsessive, twisted plans for Orton. She doesn't seem like the type of person to fold under the weight of adversity easily, but Torren is nuttier than a fruitcake (I really think that saying should be fruitier than a fruitcake, never had one with an abundance of nuts, but I digress) and I wouldn't put anything past here in her quest to get what she wants.

Miz was perfectly smarmy too, I kind of want to see more of his weaselly ways before he gets sent packing for good. I mean seriously, strawberry scented oil? What do the boys in the locker room call him, Strawberry Shortcake?

Also I have to throw my voice in with LadyDragonsblood (yeah, I'm one of those weird people who reads the reviews as well), we'll wait for however long it takes for you to update! You're stories are too damn good to simply give up on :)

OMG I LOVE IT! I'm so glad you're back, you can't leave now after I've read this! I'm sitting here with a fat grin on my face lmao. This is probably the first review I've written in years, I haven't been on here in so long and you brought me back, it's so poetic!
I hope the drama is on 100 between Torren and Maia, you go where the muses take you. Would be interesting to see if/how Miz plays into this now that he's been introduced. I think adding him into the mix will give more to the dynamics of the relationship between everyone.
Also, totally waiting on the sexy times with Randy lol just throwing that out there. It might be the only sexy times I get!

I knew if I just held out... there would be an update! YAY... you are such a wonderful writer... it is always worth the wait!

Maia sounds like a great character... ooooo Miz chasing after her... too bad though he seems to come across as man with a "Bucket List" for women... I am glad she found him "disgusting" even though she didn't really say that.

Randy... well he has a lot of issues and Maia sounds like she would be GREAT for him... too bad he is just using her... In the little I have read about Maia... she deserves more. A great job describing her family and sister... that IS the way it is in some traditional Indian households.

Oh dear... I think Maia is a LOT of trouble... I wondered when Torren would show up... now we may find out some answers...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON... just a note from author to author... you have so much talent and wonderful story telling skills... please, don't EVER give up... There are those of us that will wait for an update... no matter how long it takes. If you like to read FF too... and like slash... I have written a few stories you might like... we all need to work together to keep each other boosted and positive... so hang in there sweetie and just keep on writing!

I am so glad you updated! I love that you added Maia's character to the story. Hopefully, she'll stand in the way of Torren's plans.

OHHHHHH SHIT! It's about to go down! I'm glad you posted! I was really enjoying this story! I can't wait for the next chapter

Keep up the good work am really enjoying the consider writing a randy/emma of nxt fanfiction after this nice story

this is definitely one of the most original well written fan fic's I ever read.
I hope you update again soon