OOC, and the fucking dialogues between Maya-self-insert-chan and the crew gives me the creeps.

I don’t really read story’s like this, but honestly this is the best story I’ve ever read. You’re definitely going to become an amazing writer in the future.

This is kinda weird xD

So cute xD is that theory true? I guess it'd explain much.

not that i think zoro is negated at cuteness... is not even that he is bottoming -i like fanfics where they both do it and switch and so on, mind you- it was something at the ending that feels so out of character that i cant even pinpoint. other than that, i really liked your story and prompt, keep it creative!

The Epitome of OOC-ness

Such a cute story. Good job.

I just LOVEEE this story. It makes my heart melt and I keep giggling and saying awwwww while I read it. Thank you so much for this awesome story. Its SUPER!

Chapter was hilarious, you've a great sense of humor. Loved this one. Too cute.

I love the story and the concept and everything else that ties in with it. I've read your other stories and I love them, your writing and what you can come up with, your sense of humor and all that. However, reading that Sanji has slapped a women? I almost just stopped reading this story all together because it was such abuse to the original character and I understand it's your story but these are not your characters and personalities and from the characters we fell in love with and respect from the first time we as fans got into One Piece. Sure that lady was a witch and she deserved it but not from Sanji. I just can't see it. Also it seems like Sanji is falling in love with a baby. Not grown, consenting adult zoro, but a baby. It kind of gives me the creeps. But I've only felt that way a couple of times. That's it. The rest of what you do, brilliant, hands down amazing and incredible work.

this is adorable, I was debating if I should have read this or not but glad that I finally did

this was so cute. i loved it. the ending was awesome.

Aw, I'm so glad Mr. Zoro remembered; it broke everyone's heart to see Mr. Sanji go through all that pain and memories… *smiles at Zoro and Sanji before bowing* I'm really happy for you two.

*sighs in relief* I'm kinda glad she's gone now; she was sort of annoying and made me want to punch her... Love the story!

Aw Luffy, don't stress yourself out; we all know that you would do anything for your nakama. Besides, if anyone ever hurts any of your crew members like the marines did, I will personally see that all of their asses are kicked by me. *pulls Luffy into a gentle hug*